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Array ( [sid] => 31263 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wait until another day for rainbows [time] => 2004-01-10 12:00:46 [hometext] => your soul passed right straight through my heart... 'twas just a breath away... [bodytext] => i would have given you all of my heart
but you don't want to shake your world apart

where everything is as it should be
with you neatly living there and here, me
all you would have had to do is ask
in your love i would have forever basked

here you are right next to me and i feel a distance
i feel you are looking at us all askance
i still want you by my side
yet go on; from feelings hide

something else more important than me
someday this truth, i hope you see;
that love is given freely and finds a way
and does not wait for perfection

i feel as if i'm held at arms length
where dear, is all of our strength?
true words you spoke, of what now are you afraid?
as if not ere' uttered, now a barricade

look back upon this day and say,
"we were together not so long ago"
wait until another day for rainbows
unasked questions you may never know

over this wall; soon back to living day by day
hoping madly sweet love will find a way
singing sweet praises of one another
longing, each one, without the other

i would have given you all of my heart
but you don't want to shake your world apart

*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*

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wait until another day for rainbows

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:00:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i would have given you all of my heart
but you don't want to shake your world apart

where everything is as it should be
with you neatly living there and here, me
all you would have had to do is ask
in your love i would have forever basked

here you are right next to me and i feel a distance
i feel you are looking at us all askance
i still want you by my side
yet go on; from feelings hide

something else more important than me
someday this truth, i hope you see;
that love is given freely and finds a way
and does not wait for perfection

i feel as if i'm held at arms length
where dear, is all of our strength?
true words you spoke, of what now are you afraid?
as if not ere' uttered, now a barricade

look back upon this day and say,
"we were together not so long ago"
wait until another day for rainbows
unasked questions you may never know

over this wall; soon back to living day by day
hoping madly sweet love will find a way
singing sweet praises of one another
longing, each one, without the other

i would have given you all of my heart
but you don't want to shake your world apart

*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2004-01-10 12:00:46]
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:48:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful words Nessa - making me feel all teary eyed. Why is love so complicated? Sometimes it seems as if fate likes to toy with our hearts just for the heck of it. Hope springs eternal that true love will prevail

think positively

merry

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:50:03 PM AEST
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I feel your pain in each word Nessa. Glad to see you writing again even if it is a sad one.

Roses for your hurt,
Larry

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:17:14 PM AEST
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Nessa this is sweetly sad if that is possible. Email me soon ok?Hugs and much love to you!
Michelle

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:23:53 PM AEST
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So bittersweet, a beautiful write straight from the heart .. all my hopes are with you ... Jan

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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Awwww Ness.....painful to read...but well done.... Hope to see you soon...
Luv and Hugs,
Jenni

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:34:37 AM AEST
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AAWW This was a touching read! Hope all is well with you HUGS!!!!!! Glad your writing again! Christina

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:43:15 AM AEST
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Aww, Nessa... that's so sad. Brings to mind an old relationship of mine... I just hope this turns out better than mine did! I really do hope everything turns out okay. Lotsa love,

~ Dee

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:41:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. I had a love like this. He is not in my life now, but will always be in my heart. Love should always come with a rainbow, I think. Rita

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 01:19:43 AM AEST
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the emotions seeps out of the words Nessa

Re: wait until another day for rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 01:14:17 AM AEST
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Wise words of wisdom...
Beautiful...

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