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A commitment between two.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:32:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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who's? gonna hold your hand,
who's? gonna fight for your right.
who's? gonna take a stand,
baby am your man tonight.
yes am your man for- life,
fellows am warning you alright.
this is my women tonight,
keep your eyes an hands off alright.
girls am talking to you too,
this is my wonderful dude,
yes that is true,am marriing him too.
go fine your own due,
cause if a catch you with mine,
no excuse.don't say i didn't warn you.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2002-09-01 07:32:30]
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Re: A commitment between two.
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 03:21:55 PM AEST
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sweet sentiments here...I think if you did a little grammatical editing would be better, but it's good all the same..
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Re: A commitment between two.
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by Smackmeplz24 on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 09:24:24 AM AEST
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| I've read most of your poems now and their all very good but what is with all the errors do you have a problem with English? |
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