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Array ( [sid] => 31397 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't forget... wouldn't forget... [time] => 2004-01-11 17:59:25 [hometext] => Two years, since the girl I love walked out of my life, two years on, my love is still burning strong.... [bodytext] => More than
Seven hundreds times
Of Sun set and rises again,
Still, I could not dilute you
Off my tarmented mind...
At the first, I thought
I wouldn't care,
And friends told me,
'Everything will be fine.'
But oh girl,
How wrong was I?!
After seeing thousands
Of beauties,
What smiles in my tears,
Are still you the one!
Among the fragrance
Of your hair,
There long trapped
My heart;
Within the paradise
Of your eyes,
I was lost,
Could not break the spell,
Refuse
To find that one way out....
The others pass
Like wind from yesterday,
Except you,
Tortures me in the dream,
And would not
Fade away...
I wonder
Where you are?
I wonder
Who you with?
I wonder
If you ever miss me too?
I do not know,
Why did I
still holding on so......... [comments] => 10 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 22 [informant] => whisper-of-night [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Can't forget... wouldn't forget...

Contributed by whisper-of-night on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 05:59:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

More than
Seven hundreds times
Of Sun set and rises again,
Still, I could not dilute you
Off my tarmented mind...
At the first, I thought
I wouldn't care,
And friends told me,
'Everything will be fine.'
But oh girl,
How wrong was I?!
After seeing thousands
Of beauties,
What smiles in my tears,
Are still you the one!
Among the fragrance
Of your hair,
There long trapped
My heart;
Within the paradise
Of your eyes,
I was lost,
Could not break the spell,
Refuse
To find that one way out....
The others pass
Like wind from yesterday,
Except you,
Tortures me in the dream,
And would not
Fade away...
I wonder
Where you are?
I wonder
Who you with?
I wonder
If you ever miss me too?
I do not know,
Why did I
still holding on so.........

Copyright © whisper-of-night ... [ 2004-01-11 17:59:25]
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Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:07:35 PM AEST
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Sad but very good writing.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:42:44 PM AEST
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Oh so sad to hear that! Wow what a love you must hold! Impressive writing!

Anne :D

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweet-Poison on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:46:48 PM AEST
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awww goosebumps! lovely poem.. very emotional... and heaps of feeling... luffness!

Kay

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by monkey on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:10:07 PM AEST
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Mr. Baboon -
Sad poem, but its good. I like it. Nice job.

=) Your pal -
Missy Monkey =)

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 12:40:55 AM AEST
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Lovely sentiments......shows how strong your love is..
Jenni

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 05:47:01 PM AEST
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I understand this too well for my liking... I really liked the write though. Just made me incredibly sad to think about it when I hadn't all day. Lol. It's all good though. Hope things get better for you at least.

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:16:17 PM AEST
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this poem is breathtaking....
show it to her. she will fall into your arms.
Blessings,
Em

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:52:17 PM AEST
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WOW..my heart raced on that one..if only other men peots were like you..hmm..great write dear.Kep it coming...;)

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:14:13 AM AEST
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This poem reminded me of certain personal issues i havent thought about (tried not to think about) for a very long time...Is that not what poetry is all about? The ability to stir and create emotion and feelings within the reader? You did a real good job with this one :)...

Re: Can't forget... wouldn't forget... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:02:22 PM AEST
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Ah... I really feel this one. Its both cool and sad how love holds on to us sometimes, especially when we tell it to leave. I love this one.

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