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Array ( [sid] => 31459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Shattered Mirror [time] => 2004-01-12 09:55:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A shattered mirror
A bloodied hand
An endless stream of tears
A frightened girl who has
Just relized hear worst fears
Her life was like an endless fantasy
A loving family and her prince charming
But when this fantasy turns dark
And her knight in shinning armor
Has left her cold and in the dark
Her family life has disappeared
Then where does she turn
But to the mirror on the wall
"Mirror, Mirror on the wall please... oh please... tell me what i did wrong My family has left and my prince charming is long gone
so please tell me what i did wrong"
The mirror is silient but only for a minute the a voice echoes her worst fears
"My young child for ye see this is a test life has given ye. For ye must be alone for being alone is sometimes the only way for ye to learn and grow"
She wouldn't believe it
Never in her little fantasy world was she ever lone
She looked back into the mirror and saw what scared her the most
The one fear she kept locked inside away frome the world. She saw images of a life full of loneliess and little to no love and happiness.
she stammered back and shook her head and the word no repeated over and over again. But the images kept coming until there was a final crack. And there she is alone with
A shattered mirror
A bloodied hand
And an endless stream of tears.

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A Shattered Mirror

Contributed by Suboshi on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:55:08 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



A shattered mirror
A bloodied hand
An endless stream of tears
A frightened girl who has
Just relized hear worst fears
Her life was like an endless fantasy
A loving family and her prince charming
But when this fantasy turns dark
And her knight in shinning armor
Has left her cold and in the dark
Her family life has disappeared
Then where does she turn
But to the mirror on the wall
"Mirror, Mirror on the wall please... oh please... tell me what i did wrong My family has left and my prince charming is long gone
so please tell me what i did wrong"
The mirror is silient but only for a minute the a voice echoes her worst fears
"My young child for ye see this is a test life has given ye. For ye must be alone for being alone is sometimes the only way for ye to learn and grow"
She wouldn't believe it
Never in her little fantasy world was she ever lone
She looked back into the mirror and saw what scared her the most
The one fear she kept locked inside away frome the world. She saw images of a life full of loneliess and little to no love and happiness.
she stammered back and shook her head and the word no repeated over and over again. But the images kept coming until there was a final crack. And there she is alone with
A shattered mirror
A bloodied hand
And an endless stream of tears.





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Re: A Shattered Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:59:02 AM AEST
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Oh my god!!! Bloody brilliant! This peom is realy good!! Very original! I really felt connected with this poem! So sad and bitter.....so real!!!! Amazing!! Keep on writing!!!

Anne :D


Re: A Shattered Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:03:39 AM AEST
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"Mirror, Mirror on the wall please... oh please... tell me what i did wrong My family has left and my prince charming is long gone
so please tell me what i did wrong"

Those were brilliant lines! Well done.




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