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I Thought He Was Perfect
Contributed by
putteragain
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:43:25 PM in AEST
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He was the man
I loved as a child
To me he was "cool"
older and wild
I lived and loved
like never before
I believed it perfect
no need for more
Ten years together
5 children we share
Now never at home
showed me he don't care
Drugs to escape
the hell i had chosen
The abuse had left me
and my heart ...frozen
In prison he sat
with time now to think
So deeper inside me
i then did sink
Alone we became
children and I
I thought he was perfect
THAT WAS A LIE
Michelle Todd
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putteragain
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:53:01 PM AEST
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My god! What a terrible story! I really feel sorry for you!! The poem is very very very good its flow is magnificent. Touching as well Hope you're better. Keep on writing!
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:01:29 AM AEST
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| Sad, but a good write ... I like the simplicity ... you express your feelings well ... Jan |
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:58:00 PM AEST
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I have to tell you I really, REALLY liked this poem. Although tragic, filled with pain and reflective it was excellently written. I hope you are going to be okay, it sounds like you have had a tough time.
Kie |
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:35:54 PM AEST
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this happened a long time ago but thankyou for all you kindness
michelle |
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by CountryGirl on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:07:49 PM AEST
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| WOW! Such emotion but it can be so true. Good job in showing emotions. |
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:08:24 PM AEST
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| A sad poem. Your words touch my heart deeply. |
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Re: I Thought He Was Perfect
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by Merry on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 12:31:50 PM AEST
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sometimes people are not at all what we think they are. Great poem, expressed all of the sadness and disappointment of a marriage gone bad.
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