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Array ( [sid] => 31586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pity Isen't Love [time] => 2004-01-13 15:56:53 [hometext] => I wrote this a loooong time ago, so its almost embarassing for me to come back and look at it again. Nevertheless, I always wanted to know what people would think of it and that is why I am posting it here. Btw, not from my POV. [bodytext] => I need comfort but I do not want it
Don't act like I'm a princess
It might burn your princely garb
You'll just leave me when you've had enough
Pity isen't love
Pity isen't love

You've caught me in an unfair situation
Sister duck taped my mouth shut
So I can't tell you "no"
Pity isen't love
This is unimagineable
And don't you slam a cliche in my face either

You don't love me
I don't love you
You pity me
I pity you
You hurt me
I hurt you

This affection is fake, but necessary

You're not like she was
You're unspecial
You're unartistic
You're self-sufficent
You're unattractive
You're untrue
You're deflateable
You're unoriginal
You're dreamless

...but you care
I'm fairly sure, I really am unsure

Possabilities I've toyed with;
Situations I've considered

Such strong words,
How can I ignore? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Naoko [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Pity Isen't Love

Contributed by Naoko on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I need comfort but I do not want it
Don't act like I'm a princess
It might burn your princely garb
You'll just leave me when you've had enough
Pity isen't love
Pity isen't love

You've caught me in an unfair situation
Sister duck taped my mouth shut
So I can't tell you "no"
Pity isen't love
This is unimagineable
And don't you slam a cliche in my face either

You don't love me
I don't love you
You pity me
I pity you
You hurt me
I hurt you

This affection is fake, but necessary

You're not like she was
You're unspecial
You're unartistic
You're self-sufficent
You're unattractive
You're untrue
You're deflateable
You're unoriginal
You're dreamless

...but you care
I'm fairly sure, I really am unsure

Possabilities I've toyed with;
Situations I've considered

Such strong words,
How can I ignore?




Copyright © Naoko ... [ 2004-01-13 15:56:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Pity Isen't Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:10:17 PM AEST
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you spoke volumes here well done
michelle


Re: Pity Isen't Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:33:33 PM AEST
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wow impressive.. that is very true pity isnt love i liked that .. great job

peace
JENNA


Re: Pity Isen't Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:52:58 PM AEST
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Well it was a very good write. You did indeed speak volumes with so much less. Wrote this long ago huh? Very filled with emotion. Nice.




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