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What's wrong with you
I asked myself million times
I have no clue
Useless to read between lines
Could it be
That it's me?
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I Need To Ask You

Contributed by jeanie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I Need To Ask You

What's wrong with you
I asked myself million times
I have no clue
Useless to read between lines
Could it be
That it's me?

Copyright © jeanie ... [ 2004-01-13 15:57:04]
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Re: I Need To Ask You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:13:29 PM AEST
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Your conscience talking perhaps? That's what it seems like to me...... at any rate, however you look at it, it's a great write. Short, but very well-rounded. And the end is my favorite--- could it be That it's me? That's a great line.

God bless,
Ellen

Re: I Need To Ask You (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:25:15 PM AEST
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Thank you, Ellen :))
hehe, yes, the end is my fav, hehe, I wonder how could ME invent that ;)
I wanted to make it longer, but I guess I would have spoiled it, so, it's just short and I think it's enough like this ;)

Re: I Need To Ask You (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:08:59 PM AEST
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Short and very thoughtful. Talking to yourself or your conscience? Hmm? lol I like short poems!
Anne Keep em' coming

Re: I Need To Ask You (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:31:33 PM AEST
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wow this is short and to the point.. I have asked myself this before lol.. good job

JENNA

Re: I Need To Ask You (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:54:25 PM AEST
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Interesting... I've said this before to myself. Good write.

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