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To take your pain away
Now you know what for so long I have felt
From what to you I have just delt
I am sorry, I hope you find a beautiful girl
Who makes your head swirl
Do not think of me
Set that thought free
Find a girl who lives close to you
Where the moments you are apart are few
Find someone who will really show you love
Like that from God above
Like I could not
I know you are weary and your nerves must be shot
But think of me not
Find a girl
Who'll make your head swirl
Best of luck
I know this must suck
But it is what it is, it cannot be changed
Please don't think I am deranged
Just find someone who will make you happy
As that with me could never be
I am sorry my dear
And I fear
You might hear this too late
Please do not change your fate
Live and be glad
No longer sad
One will come for you someday
She's on her way
To your heart
But she has been there from the start

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Just a Thought before I FINALLY go

Contributed by MissLee on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

What can I say
To take your pain away
Now you know what for so long I have felt
From what to you I have just delt
I am sorry, I hope you find a beautiful girl
Who makes your head swirl
Do not think of me
Set that thought free
Find a girl who lives close to you
Where the moments you are apart are few
Find someone who will really show you love
Like that from God above
Like I could not
I know you are weary and your nerves must be shot
But think of me not
Find a girl
Who'll make your head swirl
Best of luck
I know this must suck
But it is what it is, it cannot be changed
Please don't think I am deranged
Just find someone who will make you happy
As that with me could never be
I am sorry my dear
And I fear
You might hear this too late
Please do not change your fate
Live and be glad
No longer sad
One will come for you someday
She's on her way
To your heart
But she has been there from the start

Copyright © MissLee ... [ 2004-01-13 16:01:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just a Thought before I FINALLY go (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:07:17 PM AEST
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touching write
michelle

Re: Just a Thought before I FINALLY go (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:08:53 PM AEST
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Oh..... I've been out of the loop for a while, so I haven't known what's been going on around here...... I hope everything works out for you guys.
~Ellen

Re: Just a Thought before I FINALLY go (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:14:28 PM AEST
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intresting

Re: Just a Thought before I FINALLY go (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:55:54 PM AEST
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Not sure what this meant but if I am correct. You hurt someone not meaning to and writing about helped you. Nice feelings shown and how bad you did feel at saying good-bye.

Re: Just a Thought before I FINALLY go (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:01:13 PM AEST
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This was a good write and I don't think you should leave.

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