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Array ( [sid] => 31713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Bad Seed [time] => 2004-01-14 22:06:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Lost in the world
with no direction
or chance.

False hopes keep alive,
the fire burning brightly.

The ditzy-ness of your tongue
fails to provide
any glimmer of intelligence,
but over-excels in promoting
your ignorance.

Blinded by the times,
blinded by cliches,
all your adventures
and risky experimentations
are an imitation of the past.

Doing what "should" be done,
keeping up with expectations
of your generation.

Using "fun" as an excuse,
condemning those who do not partake.

Morals, values,
they cease to matter,
cease to exist.

Your fun will only lead
to regrets and dangers,
a danger you know,
but fail to care about. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 1493 [topic] => 21 [informant] => vampy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A Bad Seed

Contributed by vampy on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Lost in the world
with no direction
or chance.

False hopes keep alive,
the fire burning brightly.

The ditzy-ness of your tongue
fails to provide
any glimmer of intelligence,
but over-excels in promoting
your ignorance.

Blinded by the times,
blinded by cliches,
all your adventures
and risky experimentations
are an imitation of the past.

Doing what "should" be done,
keeping up with expectations
of your generation.

Using "fun" as an excuse,
condemning those who do not partake.

Morals, values,
they cease to matter,
cease to exist.

Your fun will only lead
to regrets and dangers,
a danger you know,
but fail to care about.

Copyright © vampy ... [ 2004-01-14 22:06:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:31:39 PM AEST
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Good write..
Jenni

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Shows wisdom and creativity.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by sheilasin on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:09:14 AM AEST
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Do I know him?Sounds like most of my boyfriends.

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:30:07 AM AEST
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Very good write. You almost have an angry tone here. Unless it is an angry tone. I liked this one as well. Try to not be so serious about life. It is meant to be enjoyed.

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:07:26 PM AEST
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This poem is very good, it makes one-self think about making right and wrong decisions in life, very good!

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:06:58 PM AEST
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Very Creative

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:41:52 PM AEST
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Very good write..
God Bless!

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 07:06:20 AM AEST
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That is the truest thing I have read all day.

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by Sheveg on Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 12:37:15 PM AEST
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Sad. I hope things are better now.
Sherry

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by shereal_14 on Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 07:55:25 PM AEST
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You've got talent

Re: A Bad Seed (User Rating: 1 )
by Alphas0z on Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 10:54:30 AM AEST
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It describes teenagers of modern time.
We speak all sorts of things and who doesn't do the same we condomn them to exile.
We know the dangers but we ignore them.

Your poem has a meaning.
It's beautiful.

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