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So cold it drives me insane,
trying to staty warm,I light the fire,
wishing the weather man was a liar,
Oh how I would love to see the day,
of the warm sun & the ocean bay,
How much more can I take of this,
the warm summer sun I do miss,
A vacation is what I really long for,
hanging out on the beach of the sandy shore,
But all I do is look outside,and cry,
Seeing the white snow fall from the sky,
Cozy I am inside my home,
not till summer I will rome,
I have the winter blues like every year,
I just wish Spring was much more near,
I close the shades try to hide,
but the chill keeps coming inside!

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Bitter Cold!

Contributed by lowman613 on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:01:51 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Bitter cold blowing through my vain,
So cold it drives me insane,
trying to staty warm,I light the fire,
wishing the weather man was a liar,
Oh how I would love to see the day,
of the warm sun & the ocean bay,
How much more can I take of this,
the warm summer sun I do miss,
A vacation is what I really long for,
hanging out on the beach of the sandy shore,
But all I do is look outside,and cry,
Seeing the white snow fall from the sky,
Cozy I am inside my home,
not till summer I will rome,
I have the winter blues like every year,
I just wish Spring was much more near,
I close the shades try to hide,
but the chill keeps coming inside!

Copyright © lowman613 ... [ 2004-01-16 01:01:51]
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Re: Bitter Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:06:20 AM AEST
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Good description..I too feel this..venkat.

Re: Bitter Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:29:56 AM AEST
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beautiful, very beautiful:-)
MM, i would also enjoy ocean shore and sun ,but winter is very magical for me.. Love, aika:-)

Re: Bitter Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:44:40 AM AEST
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I will send you some sunshine Christina, i know what the winters can be I lived in snow country all my life until the last three years. Cheer up spring will be coming soon.Keep warm
michelle

Re: Bitter Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:04:22 AM AEST
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just keep the warm thoughts
Shari

Re: Bitter Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 03:08:50 PM AEST
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This is very well spoken! But I have not forgotten what happened last time you took a vacation!!! ;-) A fires glow can be as cozy as any ol' beach! ENJOY! :-)
~angel always~godspeed~joni

Re: Bitter Cold! (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:14:21 PM AEST
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Oh, Christina, I hate the cold too, and our furnace broke so we're using a space heater, can't afford a new one, now thats cold, I wish for spring like you, take care, Val

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