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Array ( [sid] => 31861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Blame Is On You [time] => 2004-01-16 16:43:28 [hometext] => Written tonight-just now expressed my deep and darkest anger for one particular person who ive know for years...please read [bodytext] => What am I to do anymore?
You say you wanna kill yourself
You make me wanna kill myself
You say your gonna kill my friend
Ill kill you before you ever lay a finger on her
Give me your best shot
Your lies and abuse
Four years ive put up with this
A slave to your crown
I believed ,I supported
I lost all my friends for you
I became an outsider to stand in your shoes
Now its your turn to shoulder the blame
Kill her then if you must
Do you really think we believe
Police knocking on your door right now
Its over
You’ll never see me again
And your shadows of doubt
Will come creeping up again
When you lie in your bed
Do you think of the shame?
Or the ways that you hurt me
In putting me to blame
For all your lies and mistreat
Im so angry I cant breathe
And tonight is the night
That I give up on all hope
Of ever being friends with you
Hatred is too little a word
Hell wouldn’t except you
Your to worthless to burn
Go on and cry
Phone me like you did
Claiming to die
Paracetamols you say?
How about a bullet to your heart?
Shoot a million times
Each one for the time I cried
Or lied just to keep you alive
People told me I was mad
I see it now it makes sense
I told them to not be so heartless
it let them burn you alive
I thought I got rid of you
When I came to this college
I didn’t you stalked
And persisted
And stalked my friends too
I was embarrassed and ashamed
To have known someone like you
No longer will I feel this shame and regret
Cos tonight the blame is on you




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The Blame Is On You

Contributed by LiveTheDream on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 04:43:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



What am I to do anymore?
You say you wanna kill yourself
You make me wanna kill myself
You say your gonna kill my friend
Ill kill you before you ever lay a finger on her
Give me your best shot
Your lies and abuse
Four years ive put up with this
A slave to your crown
I believed ,I supported
I lost all my friends for you
I became an outsider to stand in your shoes
Now its your turn to shoulder the blame
Kill her then if you must
Do you really think we believe
Police knocking on your door right now
Its over
You’ll never see me again
And your shadows of doubt
Will come creeping up again
When you lie in your bed
Do you think of the shame?
Or the ways that you hurt me
In putting me to blame
For all your lies and mistreat
Im so angry I cant breathe
And tonight is the night
That I give up on all hope
Of ever being friends with you
Hatred is too little a word
Hell wouldn’t except you
Your to worthless to burn
Go on and cry
Phone me like you did
Claiming to die
Paracetamols you say?
How about a bullet to your heart?
Shoot a million times
Each one for the time I cried
Or lied just to keep you alive
People told me I was mad
I see it now it makes sense
I told them to not be so heartless
it let them burn you alive
I thought I got rid of you
When I came to this college
I didn’t you stalked
And persisted
And stalked my friends too
I was embarrassed and ashamed
To have known someone like you
No longer will I feel this shame and regret
Cos tonight the blame is on you








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Re: The Blame Is On You (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:28:42 PM AEST
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Wow great anger here i hope that this poem helped u vent a little.


Re: The Blame Is On You (User Rating: 1 )
by AbstractMinded on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:56:22 PM AEST
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Wow...angry. Do you really mean what you say? nicely written. And terrifying. Expressive and heartless-a good combination!
and good for you-well dealt with.


Re: The Blame Is On You (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:55:01 PM AEST
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That was perfectly written. It was flawlessly done. Such a powerful write filled to the brim with emotion. I loved it. I hope he goes away the jerk.




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