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Parallel State of Mind
Contributed by
Mouth
on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:09:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Beyond me
My dreams,
Perfect
Water-colored
Lavender scented
Where,
I can taste love,
As real as touch
And know you,
As well as myself.
Near me;
My Awakening,
A fragile paradise
Strewn with weeds
Dark gray,
Midnight moon
Where,
I know sorrow
Like comfort;
My familliar place.
In between
Day and night;
Dusk,
Not quite twilight,
Where I am
Not wicked,
Nor heavenly saint,
But I am as quiet
As a book
And as wise
As a grave...
Copyright ©
Mouth
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2004-01-17 02:09:25]
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Re: Parallel State of Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:57:10 AM AEST
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very nice poem..enjoyed its beauty.. venkat
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Re: Parallel State of Mind
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by youlied on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:44:45 PM AEST
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| Ooh, i like this one a lot... "But I am quiet as a book, and as wise as a grave" That right there is genius :) |
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Re: Parallel State of Mind
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:12:30 AM AEST
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| I liked it... It was very interesting. I really liked the last stanza. |
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