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it never goes away
Its always there, the battle I fight with
everyday, the battle I never win

No one could ever imagain what it is I feel
its a feeling most people would say
is exgerated or unreal

The happiness and love most people
feel is always there
thats feeling of happiness is something
for me that is very much rare

Why is it that for most people life
is all peaches and cream and others
feel nothing but pain and happiness
for them is only a dream.

There are days for no reason all
I can do is cry,
I have people by my side
I know they care but they don't understand
and neither do I

Its a feeling that haunts my mind,
my dreams and my heart
its tearing my life apart

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the feeling deep with in

Contributed by fallen_angel on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 08:55:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Its a feeling deep with in,
it never goes away
Its always there, the battle I fight with
everyday, the battle I never win

No one could ever imagain what it is I feel
its a feeling most people would say
is exgerated or unreal

The happiness and love most people
feel is always there
thats feeling of happiness is something
for me that is very much rare

Why is it that for most people life
is all peaches and cream and others
feel nothing but pain and happiness
for them is only a dream.

There are days for no reason all
I can do is cry,
I have people by my side
I know they care but they don't understand
and neither do I

Its a feeling that haunts my mind,
my dreams and my heart
its tearing my life apart

Copyright © fallen_angel ... [ 2004-01-17 08:55:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the feeling deep with in (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 08:59:47 AM AEST
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Oh so sad and bitter! Yeah i know what you ment in this poem. Hope you're better now. Great write!

Anne :D

Re: the feeling deep with in (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 10:59:11 AM AEST
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READ my poem pity party...we all go through so much in our lives and sometimes we feel all alone.but you know what you can take those feelings and throw them out the door.and when you come across someone who can put an arm around them and help them feel good. what you worried about yesterday and last year has gone this day will go away as well...keep your chin up jump up and down and tell the devil leave you alone...cause he will not take your joy away...that is he is after...smile...and get some joy.....sandy

Re: the feeling deep with in (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 12:12:45 PM AEST
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great write, ...if my life had been all peaches n' cream i would have nothing to write about n' would be quite boring and dull, sometimes i feel like you in this poem, have many times in the past but i will take what life sends my way anyday over the perfect lives of ever happy monotonous people who have it all, always wanting more, with no depth of feelings n' compassion for those around them, thanx but no thanx ill keep my life of lemons; you have a gift they will never know how to express:)
hugs n' love nessa

Re: the feeling deep with in (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:50:08 AM AEST
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Well said. I think I understood it in my own way. Kinda saddening or at least it would be but I feel that way at times. Then I think about it and know they will always be there for me if I ever needed them.

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