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Array ( [sid] => 31995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Recreational Death [time] => 2004-01-17 23:57:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => demonic visions consuming my mind
secret intentions to those I loathe
wondering how their heads would look on stakes
their flesh made into canvas
to paint on my pain, their suffering
maniacal laughter forms
from the depths of my throat
when seeing thine victims dying
severing, slicing, dicing
each scream of pain makes me smile
burning, bashing, smashing,
producing thoughts even more bile
Hanging you upside down
wiring your neck to this post
nailing you arms and feet
crucifying you on an inverted cross
Your restaints still don't stop your violent jerking
Blood dripping off your flesh
Licking the blade to begin once more
You're still living
there's still work to be done
Cutting you from navel to neck
Letting your organs hang in your face
I leave the room, leave you to your peace
I have to clean up, can't go out covered in blood
To continue on my way, til those thoughts return
severing, slicing, dicing
each scream of pain makes me smile
burning, bashing, smashing,
producing thoughts even more bile [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Recreational Death

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



demonic visions consuming my mind
secret intentions to those I loathe
wondering how their heads would look on stakes
their flesh made into canvas
to paint on my pain, their suffering
maniacal laughter forms
from the depths of my throat
when seeing thine victims dying
severing, slicing, dicing
each scream of pain makes me smile
burning, bashing, smashing,
producing thoughts even more bile
Hanging you upside down
wiring your neck to this post
nailing you arms and feet
crucifying you on an inverted cross
Your restaints still don't stop your violent jerking
Blood dripping off your flesh
Licking the blade to begin once more
You're still living
there's still work to be done
Cutting you from navel to neck
Letting your organs hang in your face
I leave the room, leave you to your peace
I have to clean up, can't go out covered in blood
To continue on my way, til those thoughts return
severing, slicing, dicing
each scream of pain makes me smile
burning, bashing, smashing,
producing thoughts even more bile




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2004-01-17 23:57:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Recreational Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 12:35:42 AM AEST
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Woah this totally graphic dark and full on gore, I love it.
Excellent wording, but then I am right into grahic but you done well with this poem,
Keep it up, i look forward to more.


Re: Recreational Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 01:34:49 AM AEST
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i loved this poem.... it made me smile..


Re: Recreational Death (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:02:48 PM AEST
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this was awesome and so dark I don't know what to say. I loved it it was so disturbed...

Bobo (Joel)




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