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[aid] => mick
[title] => black valentine
[time] => 2004-01-18 02:03:19
[hometext] => a tender tale for the romantic soul. a HEARTfelt celebration of valentine's day.
[bodytext] => a cardboard box
pig heart inside
this is for you
this is for you
black construction paper
pretty glitter trims the edge
there are no words
it needs no words
bottom of the page
a blood smeared kiss
my signature
you'll know it's me
dark fantasies
of blood and flame
with you tied down
in tears, in pain
your sweat of fear
leaves you so slick
the perfect shelter
for a lonely....
i masturbate
then sit, alone
thinking of you
always you
i am yours
yet you're not mine
i'll have your heart
one way or another
as you sleep
i stand so close
i could touch you
if i choose
(so many times i've held back
so many times i've watched
your flesh so close
yet, i wanted to wait
wanted you to give me your heart
but i'm tired of waiting
so i'll take it instead)
that night so warm
a single sheet
fitfully shrouding
your sleeping form
thought of choking you
but it would leave bruises
can't scar you much
for i will keep you
instead, a pillow
firmly on your face
five minutes i held it
just to be sure
my knife so sharp
your flesh so soft
make the hole small
to leave few scars
remove your heart
and dance with it
softly we twirl
to imagined tunes
i kiss it softly
and taste it's warmth
then place it gently
on the bed
the hole is small
ignored for now
for the night is young
and we're in love
(kissing, licking
penetrating
can't believe you're finally mine
no more nights
spent hoping, waiting
for you, my precious valentine)
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[informant] => Cancer
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black valentine
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:03:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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a cardboard box
pig heart inside
this is for you
this is for you
black construction paper
pretty glitter trims the edge
there are no words
it needs no words
bottom of the page
a blood smeared kiss
my signature
you'll know it's me
dark fantasies
of blood and flame
with you tied down
in tears, in pain
your sweat of fear
leaves you so slick
the perfect shelter
for a lonely....
i masturbate
then sit, alone
thinking of you
always you
i am yours
yet you're not mine
i'll have your heart
one way or another
as you sleep
i stand so close
i could touch you
if i choose
(so many times i've held back
so many times i've watched
your flesh so close
yet, i wanted to wait
wanted you to give me your heart
but i'm tired of waiting
so i'll take it instead)
that night so warm
a single sheet
fitfully shrouding
your sleeping form
thought of choking you
but it would leave bruises
can't scar you much
for i will keep you
instead, a pillow
firmly on your face
five minutes i held it
just to be sure
my knife so sharp
your flesh so soft
make the hole small
to leave few scars
remove your heart
and dance with it
softly we twirl
to imagined tunes
i kiss it softly
and taste it's warmth
then place it gently
on the bed
the hole is small
ignored for now
for the night is young
and we're in love
(kissing, licking
penetrating
can't believe you're finally mine
no more nights
spent hoping, waiting
for you, my precious valentine)
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-01-18 02:03:19]
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Re: black valentine
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by monkey on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:09:03 AM AEST
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Wow. This poem is interesting. I dont mean to say its bad either. I really like it but I never would have thought to write about that. Good poem.
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Re: black valentine
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by hazelnut on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:19:59 AM AEST
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| sick...but i like it |
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Re: black valentine
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:10:19 AM AEST
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god this was bloody creepy and disturbing. I loved the image of u dancing with t he heart that was quite humourous I must say.
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Re: black valentine
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 04:29:33 AM AEST
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i think that the person who wrote this has a very psychological problem and seriously needs help. If you're thinking like this now imagine when you get older(if not already old)
maybe your thoughts will lead to further action. I hope this is a poem you wrote out of boredom and not for amusement instead of really meaning it. I also think you should cut down on your scary movies and get God in your life... Im gon pray for ya... |
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Re: black valentine
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by Cancer on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:10:49 PM AEST
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:: sigh :: well what is your definition of a psychological problem? what kind of help would you suggest? do you think some pompous prick with a degree could lay me on an uncomfortable leather couch and muddle his way through my collective thoughts of hatred and anger? do you think that afterwards he could prescribe me some nifty little pill to turn me into a zombie? would that be better? is it better to be an unfeeling thoughtless creature than to have feelings and thoughts that don't fit into the "norm's" zone of acceptance? if you had thoughts and feelings that weren't considered "normal" would you be in such a rush to head off to a shrink so he could pump you full of some strange substance that would rob you of all thought? or do you really value thought at all?
i'm not old, but then again i am. depends on how you determine age. i really don't see what difference another dozen years is gonna make.
maybe my thoughts will lead to further action. so? would that be so terrible? are you prepared to tell me that, even if only for a moment, you've never wanted, never even considered taking someone else's life? are you that emotionless? are you that programmed? haven't you ever wanted something more than what the Machine has instilled in you to desire?
no, this scrawl wasn't out of boredom. it was out of hatred for valentine's day and all it's mindless trappings and out of the constant stream of thoughts that i entertain. as for really meaning it, that also depends on your definition. if you mean it's something i'd like to do, then yes i really meant it. think about it, you love, yet you are denied. you remove the heart, the symbolic organ of love, from the chest cavity of your love. you dance with it, kiss it. then make sweet love to the corpse. in it's own way, it's quite romantic. you just have to open your eyes and stop living by the strict limitations of traditional romance. if you meant "meaning it" as in "this is what i'm going to do next week" then, no. i don't have any plans to do it soon. but who knows? i am somewhat impulsive. it could happen, i guess.
i don't watch many scary movies. none of them are really scary so it's kinda pointless.
and i do have god in my life. as a matter of fact, i have god in my closet. he's nailed to the wall upside down. sometimes i get bored, so i torture him for a few hours. it's amusing and a great stress reliever. he doesn't seem to mind. in fact, i think he kinda likes it. you see, we created god to be The Great Sadist to compliment humanity's natural masochistic mentality. but now he's getting a taste of our side of the whip and i think he's enjoying it. maybe more than we do.
and i appreciate the thought, but don't bother praying for me. remember, god's in the closet. he can't hear you anymore.
have a terrific day and thanks for your comment.
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Re: black valentine
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by stitches on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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dear anonymous user(aka HYPOCRITE)
if you really had god in your life, then YOU would not judge others based on what you read on poetry sites, or for that matter, anything
you would also know that GOD created "cancer" just the way he is
furthermore, if you had god in YOUR life, then you wouldn't be so ashamed to write your name when throwing such derogatory nonsense about a gOD that you obviously don't know anything about
so, maybe, instead of trying to play god and psychoanalyst, you should go and get on to page 2 of the bible, or just skip to the part "Judge not, LEST YE BE JUDGED"
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Re: black valentine
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by Silhouette on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 10:08:41 PM AEST
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anonymous your being kind a mean dont you think? not everyone's religous like you. i like his poetry. tho it's a little scary....
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Re: black valentine
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:35:29 AM AEST
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| This is the first valentines day poem I have ever liked. It brings a tear to my eye. Thank you Cancer. |
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Re: black valentine
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:23:09 PM AEST
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| that's love at it's core.....another great one....... |
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Re: black valentine
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:44:52 AM AEST
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| ***** genuis and a very well put response. "god's in my closet", heh, got to remember that one, lol. |
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