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For drowning me in this black rain;
For every stab you have given me ,every hurt you put me through
I thank you,
For you let me see the deepest shade of gloom in you
For making me question if ther is any heaven above;
For making me believe in the nothingness of live
For giving me every reason not to smile;
For pulling me beneath the surface ,mile after mile
Every cross I bear is pushed on to me by you
Every time grief is near,its you who sees it through;
You snatch every bliss that comes my way
And drag all my hopes down to decay
To cut a long story short I would say;
To you I owe my every black day
And in the end there's only one thing I 'd say to you
Thank you.

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Thank you

Contributed by pooja on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:13:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Thank you for your gift of pain;
For drowning me in this black rain;
For every stab you have given me ,every hurt you put me through
I thank you,
For you let me see the deepest shade of gloom in you
For making me question if ther is any heaven above;
For making me believe in the nothingness of live
For giving me every reason not to smile;
For pulling me beneath the surface ,mile after mile
Every cross I bear is pushed on to me by you
Every time grief is near,its you who sees it through;
You snatch every bliss that comes my way
And drag all my hopes down to decay
To cut a long story short I would say;
To you I owe my every black day
And in the end there's only one thing I 'd say to you
Thank you.

Copyright © pooja ... [ 2004-01-18 06:13:09]
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Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 09:11:39 AM AEST
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yeah ive definatley been through this...i like your poem very much....id say the say to the person who put me through this....in the end its just made us both stronger so more fool them!.....fools lol

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 05:52:27 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. That would be the ultimate thank you note to leave a couple of people I know.
~Amy

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 04:53:54 AM AEST
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Welcome Pooja....
"Every cross I bear is pushed on to me by you"...great line..entire poem is well written. venkat

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:49:52 AM AEST
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8i really like this poem and i know exactly where you coming from....i had someone who made my life hell too. hang in there. this is a great write. keep it up! luv phil xxx

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:07:56 AM AEST
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I read all your poems and I have to say that as few they are that DAMN GOOD each of them is! (Y)
you put words in amazing way, exactly the way that I understand, thank you for this feeling :D

jeanie

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by Fairy on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:04:35 PM AEST
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I read this and I tought it's wonderful.. kind of weird way to describe that your pain and agony is wonderful, but you've got a gift and are awesome at wording yourself.. I've written a poem similar to this.. I'll have to post it tomorrow but I know how you feel.. I wish I could say that feeling will come to an end, but for me, it's been over a year now.. :-( But who knows what tomorrow will bring, you know?? I hope some happiness will drift your way... I know that no one should ever have to experience the way I've been feeling and hope you don't get stuck feeling this way for too long.. keep up the great work..

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:49:55 AM AEST
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It was good and interestingly done.

Re: Thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 06:16:04 PM AEST
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what a great deal of loss and demoralization

the only thing that u should be grateful for is never being involved with this person again afterwards

take care

-K.Z.

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