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Array ( [sid] => 32019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Think Back [time] => 2004-01-18 08:30:20 [hometext] => For my Boyfriend [bodytext] => Think back to the moment we first met
Did you know it would be pure love?
Think back to the very first smile
Did you feel the sparks from above?
Think back to to the very first laugh
Did you know I would be true?
Think back to the first time you said my name
Did it feel like a natural thing to do?
Think back to when you first held my gaze
Did you know you'd melt my heart?
Think back to when we first kissed
Did you know we'd never be part?
Think back to when I first said I love you
Did you hope we'd stay together?
Cause this is how I feel
From now until forever [comments] => 5 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Think Back

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:30:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Think back to the moment we first met
Did you know it would be pure love?
Think back to the very first smile
Did you feel the sparks from above?
Think back to to the very first laugh
Did you know I would be true?
Think back to the first time you said my name
Did it feel like a natural thing to do?
Think back to when you first held my gaze
Did you know you'd melt my heart?
Think back to when we first kissed
Did you know we'd never be part?
Think back to when I first said I love you
Did you hope we'd stay together?
Cause this is how I feel
From now until forever

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-01-18 08:30:20]
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Re: Think Back (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:46:14 AM AEST
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aww! sweet! hugs n' love nessa

Re: Think Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:36:18 AM AEST
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I love poetry that makes you answer questions I fell as if I'm the boyfriend remembering those same thoughts. It's a great set-up, "think back to the moment we first met?" That hit the spot, now what could have been really good is if you described the feeling after every question. For example, Excuse me Jane can I have this dance? Or when you said "Think back to the very first smile" At the movies when I spilt the soda on your lap. Helpful hints just suggestions. I comment because I care. You got something here it's very good.

Re: Think Back (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:30:49 PM AEST
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Hey tam
Again hun thisis so timeless I love the way you keep it together using your style and flow, i want to run and hug you even more now hehe

Never stop writing hun it would be such a great loss

With luv
Luke

Re: Think Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:30:03 PM AEST
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Another amazing poem tam, really well done, so much emotion flows from all your poems, really great style of writing too!

keep on fighting
dont stop writing

john xx

Re: Think Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:02:53 AM AEST
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Very nice. Just stay true to this.

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