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Array ( [sid] => 32219 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tune Of Your Heart [time] => 2004-01-20 16:20:05 [hometext] => ~Just about someone trying to change you and not realising maybe they should change~ [bodytext] => My mind does not speak
It is frozen in thought
Yet your words
Still poison me
Leaving me
Broken inside

It’s such hatred
That suits you best-
Your chosen weaponry
And many wars
Have crossed your path
All ending shamelessly

Your path has no future
Just a broken dream
Shattered by reality
You try to change my mind
Instead think twice
And change the tune of your heart

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Tune Of Your Heart

Contributed by LiveTheDream on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 04:20:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My mind does not speak
It is frozen in thought
Yet your words
Still poison me
Leaving me
Broken inside

It’s such hatred
That suits you best-
Your chosen weaponry
And many wars
Have crossed your path
All ending shamelessly

Your path has no future
Just a broken dream
Shattered by reality
You try to change my mind
Instead think twice
And change the tune of your heart

Copyright Â© LiveTheDream ... [ 2004-01-20 16:20:05]
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Re: Tune Of Your Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 11:19:42 PM AEST
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mmm... your poem has put me quite in the reflective mood, funny how we let people affect us so, even if it is not hatred and only an unwanted unasked for opinion, their 'poison' can muchly get under our skin, i really like these lines as it hits home w/ someone i know,
"Your path has no future
Just a broken dream
Shattered by reality"
...i always tell ppl to take their own inventory, lol, my life being is as it is for a reason... very strong write, love it:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Tune Of Your Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:21:02 PM AEST
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Wow was that a powerful message. Let's just hope they take the advice to heart... Nicely written too. I liked.

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