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Array ( [sid] => 32262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Find Me in the Moonlight [time] => 2004-01-20 23:22:10 [hometext] => I cried while I wrote this...emotionally the most difficult time I've ever had writing a poem. [bodytext] => I wish I could disappear
I'm sick and tired of being here
Of drowning in my own blood
And tears, my soul died in the flood

There's nothing left of who I was
And who you were is gone
We're broken now
You don't know what this does to me
My mind's withdrawn again
Awoken dead

Lying alone in my bed
There's so much hurt locked in my head
I can't do this anymore
Take everything, my life is yours

You choked the breath right out of me
And now I'm bound to you
I can't let go
You take away what's free in life
And look right through my pain
You don't own me

And if I choose to leave tonight
You can find me in the moonlight
I'll be watching over you
'Cause no matter what, I'll always love you

When the time comes to set me free
Please play my sweet Epiphany
And know this was the only way
Just couldn't stand to face another day

Never doubt that my love was true
My happiness was all in you
But every time I cried myself dry
Little pieces of me withered and died

I loved so much I lost my heart
I lost so much I fell apart
I'll always be there in the sky
Please remember me... I love you, goodbye [comments] => 10 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Find Me in the Moonlight

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:22:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I wish I could disappear
I'm sick and tired of being here
Of drowning in my own blood
And tears, my soul died in the flood

There's nothing left of who I was
And who you were is gone
We're broken now
You don't know what this does to me
My mind's withdrawn again
Awoken dead

Lying alone in my bed
There's so much hurt locked in my head
I can't do this anymore
Take everything, my life is yours

You choked the breath right out of me
And now I'm bound to you
I can't let go
You take away what's free in life
And look right through my pain
You don't own me

And if I choose to leave tonight
You can find me in the moonlight
I'll be watching over you
'Cause no matter what, I'll always love you

When the time comes to set me free
Please play my sweet Epiphany
And know this was the only way
Just couldn't stand to face another day

Never doubt that my love was true
My happiness was all in you
But every time I cried myself dry
Little pieces of me withered and died

I loved so much I lost my heart
I lost so much I fell apart
I'll always be there in the sky
Please remember me... I love you, goodbye




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2004-01-20 23:22:10]
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Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:42:59 PM AEST
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wow so sad... tugged at my heart strings... hang in there moonlit, there are better days!


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:47:22 PM AEST
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Wow great poem...remember hun i am here for you no matter what...Great write....try to hold in there.


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:54:00 PM AEST
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Oh Moonlit, this is so touching... Tho it is a splendid piece of work, it is heart-breaking...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:09:21 AM AEST
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every single lines made my heart twist...... v_v I don't know what is going on, so I don't want to give you empty words, just- hang on there, life will find a way, and I (we) am always here to help......


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 02:00:56 AM AEST
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aww dee this is so heartbreaking, big hugs and lotsa love, im always here for you, sometimes it seems like you'll never smile again but its just around the corner:) love nessa


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:34:37 AM AEST
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The frustration and pain touched me. Hold on. Great write.


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:46:30 AM AEST
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this is beautiful Moonlit, hope you can find the strength to hang in there.. you're a truly talented writer and from what i've heard and read, a wonderful person too, who would be deeply missed.. keep writing it all out instead..
charlotte x_x_x


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:54:02 AM AEST
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This one made me cry...so sad and heart felt. Great write


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:41:38 PM AEST
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Very nice dear, pm me if ya can later I KNOW EXACLY how you feel.


Re: Find Me in the Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:03:25 AM AEST
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Oh wow Moonlit I could totaly relate to this one. I have been right there. I loved this one. I'm sorry you had to cry while writing it. Sometimes it's the only way I can cry anymore.




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