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[aid] => mick
[title] => Battle Field of Brothers
[time] => 2002-09-02 19:34:12
[hometext] => My feelings on war...
[bodytext] => Battle field of brothers
living what was once a dream as they trek in search of their enemy through forrests and streams. Soaked,chilled and wretched with.. guns and bombs and all their battle-gear young men talking amongst themselves their faces covered in mud concealing all their fear. "I wrote a letter last night" one said "To my kids and my wife, just in case this was the last day that i'd be here on earth that i'd live my life. Told them that i loved them and that tears for me,they needn't cry for its freedom we are fighting for to give our kids a better life." The words of one soldier silenced another fifteen looking back on the past was easy yet being there made their future's left unseen. The smell of fear among them the sound of raging rivers running deep despite the danger these men faced a continuous heart beats. Knowing they will soon face the men who will also fight and kill to die and at the end there will be nothing but a field where a thousand brothers lie. Approaching their enemy with their organized,strategic plan they will fight to their deaths until the winners are left to stand. Peeking over sand hills as not to catch the enemies stare silently awaiting to attack... enemy unaware. They didnt seem to make sense of war or see much of a solution in fighting off and killing eachother with such an ending, such a sad conclusion. They say the men before this generation the men who fought and were victorious in their win were the men who shared their stories for these young men to die in, but back then their was no choice they were doing what was considered right which was doing what is wrong today going out to fight. what does war prove? what does it determine? Yes,these men were brave but such a cost it had left many for the brave men are now... lying in their graves. Brothers killing brothers they say it's okay this time. Why? Because in the eyes of mankind fighting in the war.. makes murder,not a crime. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Demon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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