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Array ( [sid] => 32341 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Agony of Love [time] => 2004-01-21 20:54:46 [hometext] => Most of my poems are from personal experience, but this one's not. I just overheard some friends talking about a girl who was in love with a boy and he didn't want her. She couldn't live with it. [bodytext] => Her blood is dripping everywhere
She's lost so much, but she doesn't care

Her life has no meaning, everything went so wrong
How could he just leave after being there for so long

If he'd have cared, he would have stayed
But she was misled and had been played

Now she grips a wooden handle, holding it so tight
A gleaming edge, covered in blood, so soon she'll lose her life

There's no happiness, only pain
Nothing could ever be the same

Her eyes blur with tears that fall in the sink
The smell of death coming begins to stink

She had so much in her life to live for
But none of that matters to her anymore

Her mind numbs, everything goes blank
Her stomach rebels from the clorox she drank

No one could have ever guessed
All the pain she felt would lead to this

All the fear and betrayal
All the passion and pain, it's unreal

Her clothes are soaked in crimson
Blind anger and pain are directed towards him

She lifts her face to stare in the mirror
She screams out her rage and cracks it's armor

The glass shatters, flying all around
Bloodstained feet step on shards on the ground

Her milky white skin is scarred with so many lines
A small price to pay for unbelievable times

Now she regrets taking this rejection so far
But it's too late to help her shattered heart

Too late to fill in all the holes and missing pieces
It's too late to save her soul and she'll never meet Jesus. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 36 [informant] => krazed_AnGeL101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Agony of Love

Contributed by krazed_AnGeL101 on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:54:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Her blood is dripping everywhere
She's lost so much, but she doesn't care

Her life has no meaning, everything went so wrong
How could he just leave after being there for so long

If he'd have cared, he would have stayed
But she was misled and had been played

Now she grips a wooden handle, holding it so tight
A gleaming edge, covered in blood, so soon she'll lose her life

There's no happiness, only pain
Nothing could ever be the same

Her eyes blur with tears that fall in the sink
The smell of death coming begins to stink

She had so much in her life to live for
But none of that matters to her anymore

Her mind numbs, everything goes blank
Her stomach rebels from the clorox she drank

No one could have ever guessed
All the pain she felt would lead to this

All the fear and betrayal
All the passion and pain, it's unreal

Her clothes are soaked in crimson
Blind anger and pain are directed towards him

She lifts her face to stare in the mirror
She screams out her rage and cracks it's armor

The glass shatters, flying all around
Bloodstained feet step on shards on the ground

Her milky white skin is scarred with so many lines
A small price to pay for unbelievable times

Now she regrets taking this rejection so far
But it's too late to help her shattered heart

Too late to fill in all the holes and missing pieces
It's too late to save her soul and she'll never meet Jesus.




Copyright © krazed_AnGeL101 ... [ 2004-01-21 20:54:46]
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Re: Agony of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ianthe on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:34:05 PM AEST
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this is truly a difficult poem to read, so much pain. it is far too great a price to pay for false love. a very moving write.


ianthe


Re: Agony of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:09:37 AM AEST
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REALLY WELL WRITTEN!NOT ONLY CAN YOU READ IT,BUT FEEL IT!!NICE JOB!!!
DAN!!!!




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