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wishing this was day was different
As I look through the pages of this life
I realize this is me so it cannot be!

I turn back once more before
shutting the door on love completely

I cry inside
as my soul again dies a thousand deaths

sadly I walk away once more
this is my life
that i do Abhor!

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Hate Life

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 03:29:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Sadly I walk away
wishing this was day was different
As I look through the pages of this life
I realize this is me so it cannot be!

I turn back once more before
shutting the door on love completely

I cry inside
as my soul again dies a thousand deaths

sadly I walk away once more
this is my life
that i do Abhor!

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2004-01-23 03:29:00]
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Re: Hate Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 08:19:12 AM AEST
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Aww cheer up... Your making me sad:( Very good though... Great choice of words... "Sadly, pages of this life, shutting the door, Cry inside, dies a thousand deaths." You paint the picture wonderfully but the title hate life could it be hate being in love? Or if you could tell us what happen in the poem? Bad boyfriend, fired form job, bad parents? You know what i mean. It's so good I want more...... Smile this is great poetry.....

Re: Hate Life (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:15:03 AM AEST
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Nice piece of work, I felt the sadness immensely.

Re: Hate Life (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:38:18 AM AEST
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A nice piece of work.. please cheer up. venkat

Re: Hate Life (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:26:49 AM AEST
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wow I've been reading your poems straight through and cant stop crying great write

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