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But when I saw you, I knew,
That at that very moment,
We would be together forever.
I never believed in love at first sight,
That is until I met you.
I had many other boyfriends,
They were all jerks.
They said they loved me,
Then left me like dirt.
I was heart broken, but now,
Now it seems really different
I mean I think this love will last for eternity.
And it seems as though nothing will ever grow between us.
I know we may get into fights,
But we have to try to get through them.
And I know that we can get through this,
Because it was made to be like this.
Our love will hopefully last forever.
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Love for Eternity

Contributed by hawaii06 on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I know this may sound dumb,
But when I saw you, I knew,
That at that very moment,
We would be together forever.
I never believed in love at first sight,
That is until I met you.
I had many other boyfriends,
They were all jerks.
They said they loved me,
Then left me like dirt.
I was heart broken, but now,
Now it seems really different
I mean I think this love will last for eternity.
And it seems as though nothing will ever grow between us.
I know we may get into fights,
But we have to try to get through them.
And I know that we can get through this,
Because it was made to be like this.
Our love will hopefully last forever.

Copyright © hawaii06 ... [ 2004-01-27 17:40:00]
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Re: Love for Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
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Wow

What am amazing poem something i think we all hope for, i too didnt believe in love at first sight till i met my girlfriend, now i cant imagine a day gone by without her,
truely a great poem

all the best

Luke

Re: Love for Eternity (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:08:43 PM AEST
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HAWAII THAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM AND IM GLAD EVERYTHING IS GOING WELL FOR YOU YOU SOUND LIKE A NICE GIRL,GET WHAT YOU DESERVE.GOOD WRITE

Re: Love for Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:36:43 PM AEST
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I always like to read about love & falling in love. I enjoyed your poem very much. I wish you happiness forever. Kie

Re: Love for Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:20:30 PM AEST
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Awwww....... I always like the idea of Love in First Sight!!! This is so sweet! And it is nice when you finally met the right one! I wish you all the best!!! Love Forever!!! ^_^

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