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Array ( [sid] => 32938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => betrayed [time] => 2004-01-27 22:00:37 [hometext] => this is about someone who said they were a friend. then did everything against me. we are no longer friends. she destroyed my life. [bodytext] => If i could turn back time

i would not have cried these thousand tears

Over you.

i would stop all the lies and not say a word

To you.

i would distance myself to stop being hurt

By you.

you were my best friend, but now its goodbye

Thank you

If i could turn back time

i would not have turned my back

On myself

I would die but its easier to live

For myself.


you made me want to die.......... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 6 [informant] => lostinmyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
betrayed

Contributed by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



If i could turn back time

i would not have cried these thousand tears

Over you.

i would stop all the lies and not say a word

To you.

i would distance myself to stop being hurt

By you.

you were my best friend, but now its goodbye

Thank you

If i could turn back time

i would not have turned my back

On myself

I would die but its easier to live

For myself.


you made me want to die..........




Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-01-27 22:00:37]
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Re: betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by youlied on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:28:35 PM AEST
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I love the way this is written...it really stands out.


Re: betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:47:36 PM AEST
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no one should ever want to make you die, i know cos i have been there myself. im so sorry this happened to you, dont worry it was obviously meant to be and you will find many other friends who care [like me ;) ]
nat xxxx


Re: betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:16:36 PM AEST
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Amazing write! To be betrayed by someone you trust is one of the hardest things...




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