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Array ( [sid] => 32989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Diminishing Spirit [time] => 2004-01-28 11:13:14 [hometext] => Just a little lashing out at the great government...bc the government could be doing more to stop this... [bodytext] => Softly I fell
into a trance so calming
as I dreamed of a place
where I'm always
surrounded by love
and a comforting embrace
where no hatred and war
could ever exist
As I dreamed of my escape
all around life was lived-
And it drew me out of comfort
and back to the harsh realities
where fathers get drunk
and beat wives
then head for the kids
and rape daughters
Military men kill
and say it's for the best
Inconsiderate greedy jerks hold office
Bush, Cheney, Huckabee
I blame you for the killing
of my soul... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 41 [informant] => jacquelynne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => political )

Diminishing Spirit

Contributed by jacquelynne on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:13:14 AM in AEST
Topic: political

Softly I fell
into a trance so calming
as I dreamed of a place
where I'm always
surrounded by love
and a comforting embrace
where no hatred and war
could ever exist
As I dreamed of my escape
all around life was lived-
And it drew me out of comfort
and back to the harsh realities
where fathers get drunk
and beat wives
then head for the kids
and rape daughters
Military men kill
and say it's for the best
Inconsiderate greedy jerks hold office
Bush, Cheney, Huckabee
I blame you for the killing
of my soul...

Copyright © jacquelynne ... [ 2004-01-28 11:13:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Diminishing Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:39:13 PM AEST
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very well said, thank you for writing it, it is so true the smiling swines will go to war with the excuse of how saddam treats his people whent hey wont get off their asses and simply follow the instinct in all normal men to protect and care for women and children lame b*stards

Re: Diminishing Spirit (User Rating: 1 )
by shypoet_1986 on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:07:05 PM AEST
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Hey i like it, im one of these people who thinks if you got something to say then say it and i think you've done this pretty well. Inspired me to maybe try me hand at some political poetry :) please comment on some of my work!

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