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[title] => Relevant Discrepancies
[time] => 2004-01-30 03:15:19
[hometext] => Just a little something to every poet out there. About nothing in particular...and don't be offended.
[bodytext] => Times will arise when you're brimming with glee As you dance and you prance for your new masterpiece It's always so perfect, it's alway so deep It's moving, it's startling,so chilling it creeps And always they tell you "I loved this so much!" And always they murmur "My god. Oh, yuck." Society is honeyed by sweet, smoothing words Lest gears creak and rust tears us down Who'm I to say that mankind can't learn? That this world is a world upside-down? Forgive me; I'm bitter. For sometimes it's hard. Reliving, it's litter All trash to discard. Now granted, like most else, Your poems are good You've poured in emotion And stirred as you stood But what makes a poem so different from others? What deems this ditty so special and true? Why did you spend time, not play with your brother? What makes this poem so incredibly you? Writing is unique to every one soul And beauty is given as everyone's goal Emotions and content; depictions and rhyme I can't comprehend why you measure the time. "A sloppy construction; I did in in haste! But I'm leaving it here, might be good, just in case!" Please tell me now why your bold revelation Is a theme over-furnished in extreme presentation? What makes the poem so incredibly you? What takes the essence within? What part is not just impossibly true But also your own little spin? Granted, it's been done You can't find new words Emotions elude you You repeat what you've heard But what of you then? And why do you write? For sorrow, for loving, for hatred, for spite? I love thougtful poems and admire inventions But sometimes the writing brings absurd reprehension; "This looks familiar, I saw it just now! I'll scroll down a little and--wow!" Please, make it special From poet to poet Each human's unique And everyone knows it. Spell out your poems with emotion and feeling Avoid trite reliance on the words you've been reading Write for your heart, not for applause Make something Yours-- Don't submit to a cause. ~The Palatine Poet, Eternity's Lyre [comments] => 5 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 46 [informant] => eternityslyre [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )
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