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I do not take the dose they advise
I refuse coz I wanna criticize
I've never listened to a fashionable voice
And grace doesn't meet my choice

But if I like something trendy
It's pink grapefruit candy
It's got a taste which's never been a waste
Evokes my itch as entered the pitch
Game on!
I love this catchy trap
In two-layered wrap
That seduces me begging for stripping
Swift, soft when clipping
To my lips

I'm caught by the flavour
The real sugar's scent
I take off my armour
Here a warning comes sent...
What does it say, I don't listen though
Leave me in peace, I'm busy here now!

Then a soundless tongue play
Till it melts away
My breath's hopelessly lost
Stay with me, I'm your host(-age)

Let's follow the scheme, I'll obey all rules
This is an exception, time for the deuce
The taste of surrender yet is it sweet
Causes bad addiction which is hard to be healed

I'm gone, stunned and enchanted
By the waterfall that keeps
Me drowning with pleasure
For I love sweets

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Addict

Contributed by jeanie on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 03:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Addict

I do not take the dose they advise
I refuse coz I wanna criticize
I've never listened to a fashionable voice
And grace doesn't meet my choice

But if I like something trendy
It's pink grapefruit candy
It's got a taste which's never been a waste
Evokes my itch as entered the pitch
Game on!
I love this catchy trap
In two-layered wrap
That seduces me begging for stripping
Swift, soft when clipping
To my lips

I'm caught by the flavour
The real sugar's scent
I take off my armour
Here a warning comes sent...
What does it say, I don't listen though
Leave me in peace, I'm busy here now!

Then a soundless tongue play
Till it melts away
My breath's hopelessly lost
Stay with me, I'm your host(-age)

Let's follow the scheme, I'll obey all rules
This is an exception, time for the deuce
The taste of surrender yet is it sweet
Causes bad addiction which is hard to be healed

I'm gone, stunned and enchanted
By the waterfall that keeps
Me drowning with pleasure
For I love sweets

Copyright © jeanie ... [ 2004-01-30 15:34:56]
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Re: Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:15:00 PM AEST
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Oh ,dear! there is nothing to add, except: excellent!!!
and btw: i agree with you:-) wonderful writing, really. .really .. really.. aika:-)

Re: Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:43:49 PM AEST
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Really cute, made me smile. Well done.

Re: Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelica on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:28:10 PM AEST
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This poem made me go, "Wow!". I could virtually taste the sweetness in my mouth as I read it.

Re: Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 11:45:14 AM AEST
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Oh really sweet! Wow what a beautiful 'bunch of messy words ' (quoting) I really loved this! wonderful flow! Leaving the reader with a sweet taste ;)
Anne :D

Re: Addict (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:04:55 AM AEST
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it's me, Silchan ;)

awwwww, this poem is super cool :D I think it's my fav ever :D it got really a sweet taste, it's so fresh and spontaneous :D it's transparent and pink as a lollypop and a childish soul :DD, it got fresh trendy air which makes you smell the sweetness of love which it is sweet, but it never makes you sick ;) ah, it just gives me a cool feeling of cuteness :D really glittering poetry, light as a teenager make up :D
wow, more I read it, the more I like it :D :D :D

keep it this way, you're the best ;) :D

Re: Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by dAWn on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:04:32 AM AEST
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sticky sweet, addictively metaphorical. I LIKE it...:)))

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