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Array ( [sid] => 33339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gets Me Thinking [time] => 2004-01-31 16:04:32 [hometext] => Don't leave... [bodytext] => A lot is going thru your mind
it scares me because I don't know what you are thinking. …
in fact it gets me thinking…

I need to know how you feel
tell me if you want this to last
because we can work thru this tru
like we always do

from time to time
I sit and think
about all those times when we had our first everythings
our first glance, first look, first smile at each other

I don't want to lose that or you
you mean so much to me
please tell me we can work this out
like we always do
I'm not going to lose you again

I can't do this again
once was enough for me
and that is it

stay with me
don't leave me
you mean so much to me
I don't know what I would do with out you..
don't leave…. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Steb3544 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Gets Me Thinking

Contributed by Steb3544 on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A lot is going thru your mind
it scares me because I don't know what you are thinking. …
in fact it gets me thinking…

I need to know how you feel
tell me if you want this to last
because we can work thru this tru
like we always do

from time to time
I sit and think
about all those times when we had our first everythings
our first glance, first look, first smile at each other

I don't want to lose that or you
you mean so much to me
please tell me we can work this out
like we always do
I'm not going to lose you again

I can't do this again
once was enough for me
and that is it

stay with me
don't leave me
you mean so much to me
I don't know what I would do with out you..
don't leave….

Copyright Â© Steb3544 ... [ 2004-01-31 16:04:32]
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Re: Gets Me Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:33:15 PM AEST
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A deeply emotional poem filled with so much honesty. So many times in the past I have thought these same words. I never could have placed them in such a touching form. You did well with this one. Kie

Re: Gets Me Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:41:47 AM AEST
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Don't Leave - probably the meaning of my life. I hope you two can work things out, give it a try. Very touching poem, if only I had as much influence as you with those words to make someone want to stay. Goodluck.

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