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Waiting for a friend to get here
My loneliness seems grotesque
From my eyes falls a single tear

The time seems never ending
As I watch the world go by
My mood seems to be descending
Why is he not here yet,why?

As I seem to give up all hope
On this one remaining friend
Around my neck i tie the rope
To take me to my end [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 13 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

descending from a friend

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 06:31:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm sitting alone at my desk
Waiting for a friend to get here
My loneliness seems grotesque
From my eyes falls a single tear

The time seems never ending
As I watch the world go by
My mood seems to be descending
Why is he not here yet,why?

As I seem to give up all hope
On this one remaining friend
Around my neck i tie the rope
To take me to my end

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-02-01 06:31:26]
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Re: descending from a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:28:01 AM AEST
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um tammy??? lol u get those thoughts out ur head, only im allowed to think like that! lol.

Re: descending from a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:53:29 AM AEST
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This friend is it the same friend you speak about through your poetry ? if it is seems like your having trouble with holding on to .and if it is the same one ...this person has hurt you. I thought about killing myself the other day. if you look into my poetry one titled please let me die just kill me. I get in the mood like this when im having trouble with my husband. I want him to put up me up on this pedestool that he dont find nothing wrong in me. and when he does im so sad.... wonder why ? we go through this....ill have to write a poem about it.... you love this friend of yours..... i can tell.....sandy

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