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Array ( [sid] => 335 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cloudy Dreams [time] => 2002-07-13 19:53:09 [hometext] => Hope You enjoy this. Was just something i was asked to write about a background pic i seen. Sooooooooo this is what i came up with grins. [bodytext] =>

Her dreams are like the clouds above her around her
They are never ending and never complete
In her sadness they are like a storm and not clear
In her happiness they blow around her smooth and free

And when they challenge her heart and the rain falls down
She leans her face to the rain and kisses it, endearing
A small smile might cradle her lips as the thunder sounds
For in that moment she feels alive and theres no boundaries

When the sun's rays cannot be found not even a glimpse
And the clouds seem to wanna draw her in to almost fade
She closes her eyes and lets them envelope and carress
Like maybe a long lost lover's hand could have made. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 531 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Wicked [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Cloudy Dreams

Contributed by Wicked on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:53:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Her dreams are like the clouds above her around her
They are never ending and never complete
In her sadness they are like a storm and not clear
In her happiness they blow around her smooth and free

And when they challenge her heart and the rain falls down
She leans her face to the rain and kisses it, endearing
A small smile might cradle her lips as the thunder sounds
For in that moment she feels alive and theres no boundaries

When the sun's rays cannot be found not even a glimpse
And the clouds seem to wanna draw her in to almost fade
She closes her eyes and lets them envelope and carress
Like maybe a long lost lover's hand could have made.

Copyright © Wicked ... [ 2002-07-13 19:53:09]
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Re: Cloudy Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 11:57:04 PM AEST
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This is lovely..there are some beautiful images here. Well done.
Chrissie

Re: Cloudy Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by lilsmurfy on Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 06:06:09 AM AEST
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very nicely done ..soo smooth and lovely

Re: Cloudy Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 02:01:09 PM AEST
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I agree the imagery is impressive the last verse of the poem sells the poetry. Well done

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