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Array ( [sid] => 33532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Clueless Fool [time] => 2004-02-02 11:40:55 [hometext] => My ex cheated on me after 18months. I truely loved him. Now he expects to be friends and thinks its alrite to talk to me about the girl he left me for. He's clueless as to why i don't like her and don't want to talk about her. So i came up with this.... [bodytext] => What’s with you tonight? Have you forgotten what you’ve done?
You wonder why I’m so blunt towards you, and immediately run,
The hurt I felt went deep, deep inside, cutting through my soul,
It sliced away that important part that I could never control,
How could you have forgotten that, forgotten that you hurt me?
Leaving with someone so undesirable, a nightly guarantee,
I was replaced by this? How could you be so stupid, and so blind?
How could you think it wouldn’t matter, how could you be so unkind?
I’ve gotten to the stage where I don’t care, don’t hurt, don’t feel,
And now when I talk to you, what I’m thinking is hard to conceal,
So bitter I turned towards you, feeling hate and disgust
Then nothing… no hate, no hurt, just a memory of lost trust,
Now I yearn to move on and forget you, close off that memory,
Memories of the past becoming self-fulfilling prophesies,
I don’t want to hear her name, or what you think about her,
How you love her naked body, how you enjoy that little transfer
How you think she’s so much better, how you love having her near,
It hurt me so much before, why speak it? I do not want to hear
I do not love you anymore, but I remember how I once did,
Before the day she came along, before of you, I was rid,
I try hard to not dwell on the past; I try hard to forget it,
But I can’t if it’s her that you must continuously transmit,
I’ll treat you like a person, a friend, someone I really want to talk to,
If you don’t remind me of that girl that replaced me there beside you,
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Clueless Fool

Contributed by nomie on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:40:55 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



What’s with you tonight? Have you forgotten what you’ve done?
You wonder why I’m so blunt towards you, and immediately run,
The hurt I felt went deep, deep inside, cutting through my soul,
It sliced away that important part that I could never control,
How could you have forgotten that, forgotten that you hurt me?
Leaving with someone so undesirable, a nightly guarantee,
I was replaced by this? How could you be so stupid, and so blind?
How could you think it wouldn’t matter, how could you be so unkind?
I’ve gotten to the stage where I don’t care, don’t hurt, don’t feel,
And now when I talk to you, what I’m thinking is hard to conceal,
So bitter I turned towards you, feeling hate and disgust
Then nothing… no hate, no hurt, just a memory of lost trust,
Now I yearn to move on and forget you, close off that memory,
Memories of the past becoming self-fulfilling prophesies,
I don’t want to hear her name, or what you think about her,
How you love her naked body, how you enjoy that little transfer
How you think she’s so much better, how you love having her near,
It hurt me so much before, why speak it? I do not want to hear
I do not love you anymore, but I remember how I once did,
Before the day she came along, before of you, I was rid,
I try hard to not dwell on the past; I try hard to forget it,
But I can’t if it’s her that you must continuously transmit,
I’ll treat you like a person, a friend, someone I really want to talk to,
If you don’t remind me of that girl that replaced me there beside you,




Copyright © nomie ... [ 2004-02-02 11:40:55]
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Re: Clueless Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:47:46 AM AEST
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I STAND and clap my hands my friend...bravo bravo...you tell him... Im sorry you went throught this. it is hard giving your heart and dreams to someone totally and they not return it. LOOK forward forgive him tho because you have to or it will eat at your soul. but go one and find that pefect one that will take you and cherish you forever not looking at another....sandy good good good write....


Re: Clueless Fool (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:55:09 AM AEST
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I had a girl who did the same thing to me. She would talk about her new boyfriend and all the problems she was having with him and I'd be thinking: HELLO?! You could've had me, so quit your whining! I eventually ditched her because I was sick of hearing about it. Anyone who would do that should show more sensitivity. The only reason someone wants to be friends with you after they rip out your heart is so they won't feel guilty about doing it. Ditch this jackass and find someone else. He's a waste of time.




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