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Array ( [sid] => 33592 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Love With You [time] => 2004-02-02 20:51:38 [hometext] => I just wrote this today in 4th period and it's about my relationship with my boyfriend...and I think this one is pretty good! Enjoy! [bodytext] => I don't know how you can love me,
When I act the way I do,
When I'm constantly second-guessing,
Everything I thought I knew.
I can't take a compliment,
I always say things out of bound,
Even when you reassure me,
I end up putting myself down.
But you have a different frame of mind,
When it all comes down to me,
You picture me truly,
Something I'm too stubborn to see.
But even though I'm crazy,
Through all the actions that I do,
There is something I know for sure,
When it comes to you.
I'll forever be here,
Whenever you shall need me,
I'll be forever by your side,
As long as you'd like me to be.
I'll always be your companion,
When the world gets too much,
And I'll always be your motivation,
When you feel like giving up.
I mean this all truly,
And every word I say I'll do,
I mean this from the bottom of my heart,
All because I'm in love with you.

(I love you Jonathon or "Mr. Levan" :o))
*Heather Marie Hutchins*
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In Love With You

Contributed by HedderMarie on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:51:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I don't know how you can love me,
When I act the way I do,
When I'm constantly second-guessing,
Everything I thought I knew.
I can't take a compliment,
I always say things out of bound,
Even when you reassure me,
I end up putting myself down.
But you have a different frame of mind,
When it all comes down to me,
You picture me truly,
Something I'm too stubborn to see.
But even though I'm crazy,
Through all the actions that I do,
There is something I know for sure,
When it comes to you.
I'll forever be here,
Whenever you shall need me,
I'll be forever by your side,
As long as you'd like me to be.
I'll always be your companion,
When the world gets too much,
And I'll always be your motivation,
When you feel like giving up.
I mean this all truly,
And every word I say I'll do,
I mean this from the bottom of my heart,
All because I'm in love with you.

(I love you Jonathon or "Mr. Levan" :o))
*Heather Marie Hutchins*




Copyright © HedderMarie ... [ 2004-02-02 20:51:38]
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Re: In Love With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:46:11 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I can identify with this.... I am the same way... sometimes I wonder how my husband of 25 years put up with me..
Loved this..
Jenni


Re: In Love With You (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:03:40 PM AEST
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Hey baby, its me that was a great poem. Yes from time to time you may be a little stubbourn when i say you are beautiful or cute, but whether or not you beleive it is up too you. I love you for who you are and i always will. You are the best thing that has ever happened too me thankyou for being there for me when i need you baby. Like i said you are the one. I love you honey and i always will : )


Re: In Love With You (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:57:13 PM AEST
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This is sooo cute!




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