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Years advance, seasons pass, to him do they surrender
When the coldness must begin, and the snowflakes must fall
A life will be taken, winter will cry, it will lash out a squall

When soft snow will drown in their eyes and the rain will blow
Hopeful, blooming hearts of spring’s children will witness sorrow
Children of summer will swim in the ocean of yearning under God’s heat
Every heartfelt laughter belonging to autumn’s children will retreat

The ice’s radiance will glitter as the asphalt will restrain from it’s menace
It will affect a footprint, sadden a heart, leave a mother and father childless
It will create a lifelong tear and lifetime sorrow that never in their soul shall perish
Womb-to-tomb, it won't dissolve, memories of lifelong smiles,all cherished

But life continues,it continues through rain,sun,tempest and dust
Sometimes they admit that from time to time,their spirits touch
It is to those I write today,those who have lost someone known as a child
These verses,stanzas,these rhymes..for you I compile

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This poem especially goes out to the parents of my friend who died 3 years ago in December [comments] => 13 [counter] => 357 [topic] => 55 [informant] => PumpkinPie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 64 [ratings] => 13 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Children Of Winter

Contributed by PumpkinPie on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:08:28 PM in AEST
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Born to the world, given by the grace of God, our saviour
Years advance, seasons pass, to him do they surrender
When the coldness must begin, and the snowflakes must fall
A life will be taken, winter will cry, it will lash out a squall

When soft snow will drown in their eyes and the rain will blow
Hopeful, blooming hearts of spring’s children will witness sorrow
Children of summer will swim in the ocean of yearning under God’s heat
Every heartfelt laughter belonging to autumn’s children will retreat

The ice’s radiance will glitter as the asphalt will restrain from it’s menace
It will affect a footprint, sadden a heart, leave a mother and father childless
It will create a lifelong tear and lifetime sorrow that never in their soul shall perish
Womb-to-tomb, it won't dissolve, memories of lifelong smiles,all cherished

But life continues,it continues through rain,sun,tempest and dust
Sometimes they admit that from time to time,their spirits touch
It is to those I write today,those who have lost someone known as a child
These verses,stanzas,these rhymes..for you I compile

----------------

This poem especially goes out to the parents of my friend who died 3 years ago in December




Copyright © PumpkinPie ... [ 2004-02-02 22:08:28]
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Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:32:24 PM AEST
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Sigh..... so very true.....I know...
Excellent write....
Jenni


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:39:35 AM AEST
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AAWW this was true yet so sad! Christina


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 08:30:48 PM AEST
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Hi pumpkin pie, my name is MolsonMan 'cause i have a molson tatoo and i really like your poem. Your so poetic girl.you have an excellent write....continu like you begin

unknow fan xxx


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 10:48:25 PM AEST
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So touching and moving.
Sad but beautifull.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for your sweet comment on my poem.


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:47:59 PM AEST
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I could easily empathise with the sentiments expressed here, thanks to the vivid way you portrayed them. Thanks again.


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:52:13 AM AEST
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It must be the most difficult. I cannot imagine it. You have touched on that grief. I know life is to go on after, but I don't know how those who have had this loss can cope. Thank you for sharing.
Stitch


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:04:37 PM AEST
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Dear words for a dear friend, the parents I hope are very gratful to have you writing these things for them.

tt


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:37:14 PM AEST
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I think this poem is amazing so deep, so lost, but most importantly so authentic. I think someone could read this out at a funeral and it would affect the entire audience... very sad you have executed this poem so well with your deep heart and sombre tongue. This is superb Cindy - just like all of your poems...

Rod


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:23:11 PM AEST
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This is so sad and true. Wonderful write.

Spazzo


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:37:52 PM AEST
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Sweetly sad. I see much compassion in this poem. Wonderful! Blessings!


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:23:03 AM AEST
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Aw, Pumpkin, that was sad and brilliant piece of writing. Bringing a tear to my eye and a lump to my throat I can only imagine what it would be like to lose a child before their time. I think this write brought me a step closer to that thing I can only imagine and hope that I will never have to experience. Absolutely another great write from you.

Tim


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 10:44:37 AM AEST
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I am so glad that I had a chance to read this, it's beautiful. It's so sad, and the pain is very obvious.

I miss poetry like this, true and raw and so well written.

God bless you,
Phil xxx


Re: Children Of Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 08:41:42 AM AEST
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Oh Pumpkin, I can't imagine? I have dear friends that lost a little girl named Penny. They are so brave, but I know she is there in their hearts every single day.
This poem is so touching, and helps all of us to feel the loss, even though we can't come close.........it's poets like you that help us try.
Warm love and tender affections to your dear friend.
ConSue




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