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Array ( [sid] => 33636 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walk With Me [time] => 2004-02-03 05:26:24 [hometext] => This is what would follow the scenes in 'Empyrean Dream.' Sublime thoughts, at least in my eyes. [bodytext] =>
Together, with our hands clasped as one
We'll blaze a trail into destiny
United, our bliss has just begun
We'll forget our pain synchronously

In concert, accompanied by waves
We'll stroll the shore of our sunset beach
Hand in hand, bonded beyond our graves
We'll caress the sky for which we reach

Heart to heart, our love grows very strong
We'll pursue the welkin that is ours
Arm in arm, toward where we belong
We'll find our path mapped out in the stars

Soul to soul, ascend above the haze
We'll be immersed in azure sea
Step by step, the moon is in our phase
We'll walk into eternity

Together, our spirits linked as one
We'll tread this road of destiny
United, we're brighter than the sun
We'll cast off our pain concurrently

All you need to do is walk with me
I promise we'll never look back on yesterday
May our stride eclipse infinity [comments] => 6 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Vitreous_Soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Walk With Me

Contributed by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:26:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




Together, with our hands clasped as one
We'll blaze a trail into destiny
United, our bliss has just begun
We'll forget our pain synchronously

In concert, accompanied by waves
We'll stroll the shore of our sunset beach
Hand in hand, bonded beyond our graves
We'll caress the sky for which we reach

Heart to heart, our love grows very strong
We'll pursue the welkin that is ours
Arm in arm, toward where we belong
We'll find our path mapped out in the stars

Soul to soul, ascend above the haze
We'll be immersed in azure sea
Step by step, the moon is in our phase
We'll walk into eternity

Together, our spirits linked as one
We'll tread this road of destiny
United, we're brighter than the sun
We'll cast off our pain concurrently

All you need to do is walk with me
I promise we'll never look back on yesterday
May our stride eclipse infinity




Copyright © Vitreous_Soul ... [ 2004-02-03 05:26:24]
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Re: Walk With Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:02:42 AM AEST
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Wonderful....very delightful.. venkat


Re: Walk With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST
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OMG dan this is brilliant

This goes straight into my number one slot dude!!!
the imagery and flow the structure everything
this is by far one of your best pieces in my eyes it really is
geat write dude really left me begging for more especially the last line
'May our stride eclipse infinity'!!! amazing!!

Luke


Re: Walk With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:41:22 AM AEST
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Beautifull, very creative!
Awesome.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Walk With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:38:19 PM AEST
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Another poetic marvel. Oh to have your mind and abilities for one day, that would be my dream. Romantic, touching & beautiful. Kie


Re: Walk With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:08:44 AM AEST
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Nice read, you created beautiful imagery.
Inspirational =)

Queen_Dolly


Re: Walk With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticReign on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:31:36 PM AEST
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Very impressive, V.S! Sounds like something i'd write. I'm with Luke -- that last line was stunning! :) ~PR




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