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Death of the Soul
Contributed by
brghtnsnshny
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:47:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Shooting out each way
Spewing at anyone who passes by,
not aimed at anyone in particular
come near and you'll be my next target.
Bring it up, and I'll try and hold it in
don't case me to speak
cause you won't like what I have to say, make you feel like dirt
I desire to be violent,
I desire to hurt others like I hurt.
Want other to feel how I do
deep anguishing pain will I bring
so deep, a dark hole,
empty of everything
I care for nothing, but I will hurt.
No longer will I take crap
don't give me cause to speak
because I will give it all to you in a snap,
your best choice of action is to stay far away
no one is special enough
to not be a target of my anger.
cold heart with black blood tough
back off, stay off, and don't come near me
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2004-02-03 17:47:05]
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Re: Death of the Soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:17:50 PM AEST
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Have you ever heard of Anger management
Get a grip, your life is no diff. then anyone else. Life will always be full of ups and downs and it seems your in a down but look to the bright side ever valley has a mountain to climb with a beautiful horizon to see |
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Re: Death of the Soul
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by JadedExistence on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:20:53 AM AEST
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Good job. You wrote what you felt and you wrote it well. To the last poster...everyone's life is different, everyone goes through different things, and everyone deals with them differently. brghtnsnshny, keep writing, it's an amazing release from...well , everything.
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