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Array ( [sid] => 33821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Wings [time] => 2004-02-04 14:36:35 [hometext] => This is a song that I am working on...Please leave comments. [bodytext] => She'd do anything to fly again
Her wings are broken
She has been defeated
She'd do anything to shine within his eyes
Yet this battle has been lost
Hope has flown away upon her wings

With each new day comes another burden
The shadow is her confort
Darkness, her delight
Slowly she transforms into a child of night
With her tears and blood her soul creates
A beautiful self-portrait
And a disguise in which she can abide
When the morning comes to haunt her

But then one day, she came to realize
In vain was her life of creating lies
Of no worth was her beautiful disguise
She never was and never will be
Specail through his eyes
That fateful day she realized
Her life was but a dream
And love is but a lie
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Broken Wings

Contributed by SkYYBLu on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She'd do anything to fly again
Her wings are broken
She has been defeated
She'd do anything to shine within his eyes
Yet this battle has been lost
Hope has flown away upon her wings

With each new day comes another burden
The shadow is her confort
Darkness, her delight
Slowly she transforms into a child of night
With her tears and blood her soul creates
A beautiful self-portrait
And a disguise in which she can abide
When the morning comes to haunt her

But then one day, she came to realize
In vain was her life of creating lies
Of no worth was her beautiful disguise
She never was and never will be
Specail through his eyes
That fateful day she realized
Her life was but a dream
And love is but a lie

Copyright © SkYYBLu ... [ 2004-02-04 14:36:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:53:24 PM AEST
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its good

michelle

Re: Broken Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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what style of music is this for...it works well for my Death metal vocals the ryhming helps emphasise the rythm and your imagery and word play is great in this one too.

Re: Broken Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:12:45 AM AEST
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This was beautiful you captured the poem beautifully. I lapped up every word very nicely done.

Bobo (Joel)

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