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Array ( [sid] => 33923 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Prayer [time] => 2004-02-05 01:55:57 [hometext] => I've actually decided to post this one too as I wrote them both tonight... Kinda like the other... In it's own way. I like it though so. [bodytext] => Dementia stole my
mind last night.
She took my
breath away.
I could taste
insanity resting
gently on her lips.
I could feel
her body wrapped
against me.
Making love atop
her grave to be.
Angels shrieking
in my head as
I thrust deep
inside her.
She whispered
that she hated me
as she screamed
in lust.
She's my angel
of death.
Here to bring
genocide to light.
Her eyes like
a dying light.
Alpha and Omega.
The dying of
all life.

Raven's Sin [comments] => 10 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Black Prayer

Contributed by Cobalt on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:55:57 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Dementia stole my
mind last night.
She took my
breath away.
I could taste
insanity resting
gently on her lips.
I could feel
her body wrapped
against me.
Making love atop
her grave to be.
Angels shrieking
in my head as
I thrust deep
inside her.
She whispered
that she hated me
as she screamed
in lust.
She's my angel
of death.
Here to bring
genocide to light.
Her eyes like
a dying light.
Alpha and Omega.
The dying of
all life.

Raven's Sin

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-02-05 01:55:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:06:21 AM AEST
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this was brilliantly dark. I loved it glad u decided to share it with us.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by Rawkergurl2003 on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:19:35 AM AEST
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amazingly interesting. liked it alot. thanx for sharing.
rawkergurl

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:48:24 AM AEST
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That first line gave me shivers... I could hear it in my head, being spoken in this chillingly calm, emotionless voice... creepy!! After that every line just pulled me in and kept me riveted. You never fail to amaze me.

~ Moonlit

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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thanks. I hate your dark side. Now I can go back to the watnting to slap you through the computer again...its what I needed. LOL write one about making love on top of someone's grave on a foggy moonlit night...next to a man digging a fresh one....bats flying round dripping blood......that'll "suck" em in

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:29:18 PM AEST
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Dis iz so dark. It iz totally different, displaying a strong image.
Dark2Dark

Ruby1987(Aaliyah)

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:54:02 PM AEST
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It was dark and I liked it. Kie

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:45:54 PM AEST
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this is vivid and dark and i love it..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 05:45:23 PM AEST
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Great imagery!! Awesome write, Jeff...
Jenni

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:40:59 PM AEST
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Another dark suggesting creepy one, this one had more imagery, very disturbing, and the wording full of parallelism if you know what i mean, and if you don't ......don't ask me :p lol
Anne :D

Re: Black Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:18:08 AM AEST
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love it, hugs n' love nessa

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