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Array ( [sid] => 34069 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => OD on Life's Glory [time] => 2004-02-06 08:58:25 [hometext] => This poem was written true to form, while I was at school I was not in my usual state of mind. These are the thoughts that followed. . [bodytext] => Today I seen myself fidget, unraveled; appearing as if my mind had gone elsewhere.
All those others had known, for silence was there knowing.
The expressions from those of my teacher, only added to the thrill in which I was mesmerized by.
Belonging to somewhere else, allows your true inventions to be expelled upon.
Normality is nothing more then a simple term, such as love or hate.
It is however more when you conclude a sense of feeling in relation with those terms.
There are many trying promises to be reminded of when you are stuck in this realm of right and wrong.
When is the correct appropriation for stating the feelings of love or passion?
How is this commitment in the wrong if you focus on it in a wrong time, or with an incorrect being?
How is it possible to break one's self free from this trap that has been set?
When is it no fun to per take in this series of madness?
Intriguing as it may seem, only results in the casualty of another beloved individual?
Is there no medication which can be prescribed to alter one's path down this horrific experience we can life?
If so, please refill my prescription, I need to begin my over dosage.
What will be the result?
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OD on Life's Glory

Contributed by apollo on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:58:25 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Today I seen myself fidget, unraveled; appearing as if my mind had gone elsewhere.
All those others had known, for silence was there knowing.
The expressions from those of my teacher, only added to the thrill in which I was mesmerized by.
Belonging to somewhere else, allows your true inventions to be expelled upon.
Normality is nothing more then a simple term, such as love or hate.
It is however more when you conclude a sense of feeling in relation with those terms.
There are many trying promises to be reminded of when you are stuck in this realm of right and wrong.
When is the correct appropriation for stating the feelings of love or passion?
How is this commitment in the wrong if you focus on it in a wrong time, or with an incorrect being?
How is it possible to break one's self free from this trap that has been set?
When is it no fun to per take in this series of madness?
Intriguing as it may seem, only results in the casualty of another beloved individual?
Is there no medication which can be prescribed to alter one's path down this horrific experience we can life?
If so, please refill my prescription, I need to begin my over dosage.
What will be the result?




Copyright © apollo ... [ 2004-02-06 08:58:25]
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Re: OD on Life's Glory (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:47:01 AM AEST
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very good questions to ponder, i need a refill myself, seeing into ones heart can only have some sort of conclusion, no? hugs n' love nessa




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