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Array ( [sid] => 34127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On Mornings Bright [time] => 2004-02-06 22:28:51 [hometext] => The idea behind this is a little morbid, perhaps, though the poem itself is not . . . in the ideal world, I'd like to have this read at my funeral. [bodytext] => I've risen to the placid skies
diffused amid sweet rain
I'm in the wings of dragonflies
I've kissed goodbye the pain

and if you doubt my word is true
just gaze on mornings bright
for you can find me in the dew
I glimmer in the light

I join the glinting stars by night
look close, and you may see
amused, I smile in delight
a distant memory

when laughter rings, may my voice too
when sun doth set, my eyes
I send this all, a gift for you
a message from the skies. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 52 [informant] => ShadowDaughter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

On Mornings Bright

Contributed by ShadowDaughter on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:28:51 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I've risen to the placid skies
diffused amid sweet rain
I'm in the wings of dragonflies
I've kissed goodbye the pain

and if you doubt my word is true
just gaze on mornings bright
for you can find me in the dew
I glimmer in the light

I join the glinting stars by night
look close, and you may see
amused, I smile in delight
a distant memory

when laughter rings, may my voice too
when sun doth set, my eyes
I send this all, a gift for you
a message from the skies.

Copyright © ShadowDaughter ... [ 2004-02-06 22:28:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:36:36 PM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~ hugs n' love nessa

Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:55:49 AM AEST
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Nora, you've left me speechless...this may very well be your best yet. Morbid, yes, but even moreso than that, breathtaking. This belongs aside the best of the best...gah, I love it!

Truly, with CPDE's and CEGH's,
-Dan

Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:11:21 PM AEST
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This Nora is your masterpiece. I didn't find it morbid I found it enthralling. Beautiful and I am amazed at your depth sometimes.

"I'm in the wings of dragonflies"

This brought tears to my eyes. I don't know why other than I can see a dragonflies wings in my mind and how lovely they are.

It is true you know, you are a beautiful person inside. It shows in this poem.

Loved this one----Kie

Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 10:46:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful indeed! This has a very sensitive, natural, Celtic beauty. I like it!
Andrew

Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:13:19 PM AEST
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This is really good, as i have said before you have a wonderful talent! Keep it up!

Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:16:17 PM AEST
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ahem... Nora... this way by far the best i have read yet. This, although yes a little morbid, is beautiful in its meaning. For some reason, the ide aof it being read at a funeral...at your funeral... that brings me to tears... what a wonderful farewell. Lets hope its not EVER soon.

Lindsey

Re: On Mornings Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:31:05 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, I liked it very much.

Thank you for sharing.

Chris

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