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Array ( [sid] => 34221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~he found her in the flowers ~w/ moral [time] => 2004-02-07 20:44:59 [hometext] => one evening this poem came to me whilst warming my rear by the fire; after 38 pms n' comments; here's my moral with who guessed best! i surrender!! lol [bodytext] => he found her in the flowers
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*she was as patient as a monument*
Exclaimed the Caterpillar,
"But he doesn't listen to me at all!"
Answered the Mongoose before he devoured her,
"Why should he when you're at his beck and call?"

~caterpillar: symbolizes love
~'he doesn't listen'--> (her love)
~mongoose: represents life
~*my note: -*she was as patient as a monument*-:
love was waiting, patiently whilst life passed by; love was unattended, love was not given its wings, so wasted away to nothingness,
~flowers: when you die you symbolically go back to the earth and flowers.

*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*

~MORAL:
given not its wings; love unattended is consumed by life.

*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*

*special hugs, love n' recognition to yodo and Necromant who gave so much effort and thought to my meaning and symbolism warming my heart:) xxx...

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~he found her in the flowers ~w moral

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:44:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

he found her in the flowers
----------------------------------------------------
*she was as patient as a monument*
Exclaimed the Caterpillar,
"But he doesn't listen to me at all!"
Answered the Mongoose before he devoured her,
"Why should he when you're at his beck and call?"

~caterpillar: symbolizes love
~'he doesn't listen'--> (her love)
~mongoose: represents life
~*my note: -*she was as patient as a monument*-:
love was waiting, patiently whilst life passed by; love was unattended, love was not given its wings, so wasted away to nothingness,
~flowers: when you die you symbolically go back to the earth and flowers.

*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*

~MORAL:
given not its wings; love unattended is consumed by life.

*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*

*special hugs, love n' recognition to yodo and Necromant who gave so much effort and thought to my meaning and symbolism warming my heart:) xxx...

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2004-02-07 20:44:59]
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:47:09 PM AEST
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ahh, i see...=) good job, you stumped us all lol

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:38:27 PM AEST
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Oh beautiful Lady Caterpillar, I see you found your wings, life sometimes seems gray as granite, but love will make you sing, Love ya Val ( Surrender, just surrender)

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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Bravo! Bravo! I can't wait to read your next submission. Kie

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:50:03 PM AEST
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my dearest nessa - so glad you explained this one - good heavens I had it all twisted round.
ignore love, pass it by? only a fool would do a thing like that. sometimes fools need a good smack upside the head.....heheehe well it might work.

hugs
merry

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:12:25 PM AEST
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Very unique, so true.
Great one here.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:56:55 PM AEST
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This was definitely cute and well though out. Love is so fickle. It can bring you up, but then it lets you fall. Of course, that is a risk we all take. It can only wait so long, like your poem says, and then it's gone...

Take it when you can get it!

Jazz

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by lonesomerose on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:21:09 AM AEST
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so talented and creative you are Nessa
michelle

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:14:37 PM AEST
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You did a great job Nessa. *S* Cynthia

Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 04:30:38 PM AEST
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very creative i love this poem

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