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Array ( [sid] => 34263 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shadow [time] => 2004-02-08 04:42:38 [hometext] => This is my first time submitting a poem. [bodytext] => As the shadow covered my body
timeless spells
the moonlight shone towards me
I do not feel the cold, nor do I fear the shadow

As the mist surrounding my body, grew closer
I thought of you now free from all pain
soul was nolonger surrounded by tissue
but a free spirit in the sky

As the light grew closer
it took hold of my hand
then walked me towards
my promise land [comments] => 4 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 13 [informant] => L-Dee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Shadow

Contributed by L-Dee on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



As the shadow covered my body
timeless spells
the moonlight shone towards me
I do not feel the cold, nor do I fear the shadow

As the mist surrounding my body, grew closer
I thought of you now free from all pain
soul was nolonger surrounded by tissue
but a free spirit in the sky

As the light grew closer
it took hold of my hand
then walked me towards
my promise land




Copyright © L-Dee ... [ 2004-02-08 04:42:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:15:25 PM AEST
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Good poem, i liked the last stanza. Welcome to the site.


Re: Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:29:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...the best poetry site on the net!!! Lovely write...
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Re: Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by pain_and_tears on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 05:14:43 PM AEST
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I took your advise and read your poem. I like it very much. good write


Re: Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST
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Welcome, Welcome!!

Bravo on this one. I thought it was a great first submission. You have alot of talent. I look forward to seeing more.

Kie




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