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~~~~~~~~~~
The way you laugh,
The smile on your face,
The light that you bring,
No one could ever replace.

You're such a friend to me
I can always feel you there.
I see you in my reflection
And hear your whisper in the air.

You're the song that I sing,
The air that I breath,
You are my everything
Please don't ever leave.

You've brought more to my life
Than anyone can see
You couldn't comprehend it
The only one who could is me.

No animosity,
No childish games.
You say you'll be there forever,
But yet that's what everyone claims.

So make me this promise now
Say you'll always be true
Because I'd rather have no other friend,
Than the one I have in you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Aaralyn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

You are Me

Contributed by Aaralyn on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:22:23 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You are Me
~~~~~~~~~~
The way you laugh,
The smile on your face,
The light that you bring,
No one could ever replace.

You're such a friend to me
I can always feel you there.
I see you in my reflection
And hear your whisper in the air.

You're the song that I sing,
The air that I breath,
You are my everything
Please don't ever leave.

You've brought more to my life
Than anyone can see
You couldn't comprehend it
The only one who could is me.

No animosity,
No childish games.
You say you'll be there forever,
But yet that's what everyone claims.

So make me this promise now
Say you'll always be true
Because I'd rather have no other friend,
Than the one I have in you.

Copyright © Aaralyn ... [ 2004-02-10 16:22:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You are Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:27:22 PM AEST
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Its a sweet poem, along with a sweet sentiment. Its sad how things change.

Re: You are Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 05:08:18 PM AEST
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Really very beautiful...and sincere...
Jenni

Re: You are Me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:57:01 PM AEST
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GOOD WRITE. MADE ME CRY. I have a sister named elizabeth. we lost a sister at age 9 . so we make sure our relationship is there. and it is. we love eachother very much. wrote poems about her. sandy

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