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[aid] => mick
[title] => Sacrifice
[time] => 2004-02-10 23:42:38
[hometext] => sacrificial virgin?? I don't think this poem is done yet..... I want to add more, but I'd like some feedback first.
[bodytext] => One star here, another there A silver glitter in the air A steel knife, a marble stand Come hither now, to hold my hand Who ever thought that stone would be this cold? Just listen to the graveyard tales of old The spirits of a time long past, when ghosts were running free Now as I lay here dying, will you stop and think of me? Beneath the fullness of the moon A sacred loop of nightly blooms They gather here, to cut me down A virgin in a wedding gown Who ever thought that stone would be this cold? Just listen to the fairytales of old When princesses were rescued, and the dragons left to bleed Now as I lay here dying, will you stop and think of me? In hopes of rain for thirsty skies They find a girl to sacrifice Well here I am, all bound in chains Come hither, prince, I'm here to save Who ever thought that stone would be this cold? Just listen to the melodies of old Bewailing the lover who's been lost upon the sea, Now as I lay here dying, will you stop and think of me? I do not fear eternity Will anyone remember me? A flash of steel, a marble stand Come hither, now! Please, hold my hand... The spirits of a time long past, when ghosts were running free When princesses were rescued, and the dragons left to bleed Bewailing the lover who's been lost upon the sea Now as I lay here dying, will you stop and think of - Who ever thought that death would be this warm? Ah, sweet revenge, a scarlet rose of thorns I'm off to see the dragon god these murderers believed... And then I'll haunt that bastard prince who should have set me free! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 401 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Cora-Windover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
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