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Array ( [sid] => 34747 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Help me out of here [time] => 2004-02-12 17:00:15 [hometext] => Why does the past keep creeping back. [bodytext] => Why does this happen
Why do I try
I get so far
But wined up nowhere
I need to get out
Of this hole I dug
It looks so tempting
To my eyes once again
I feel so depressed
Yet feel happy for a moment
This feeling I have
Is more than I can bear
Please someone help me
Get out of this hole
I keep digging this hole
Going deeper and deeper
Only to find hopelessness
Time seems to be against me
But it still moves so slowly
Only if that day never happened
This mighty hole I’ve dug
Would be a mighty mountain
For me to stand proud
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 32 [informant] => lostlove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Help me out of here

Contributed by lostlove on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:00:15 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why does this happen
Why do I try
I get so far
But wined up nowhere
I need to get out
Of this hole I dug
It looks so tempting
To my eyes once again
I feel so depressed
Yet feel happy for a moment
This feeling I have
Is more than I can bear
Please someone help me
Get out of this hole
I keep digging this hole
Going deeper and deeper
Only to find hopelessness
Time seems to be against me
But it still moves so slowly
Only if that day never happened
This mighty hole I’ve dug
Would be a mighty mountain
For me to stand proud

Copyright Â© lostlove ... [ 2004-02-12 17:00:15]
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Re: Help me out of here (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:05:38 PM AEST
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well dig yourself out of the hole and builid your mountain, i love this write!!
~Remy~

Re: Help me out of here (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:20:51 PM AEST
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Once, I heard about a man in a hole..he yelled for help. His friend climbed down into the hole with him. The man said, "Well, you're a big help..now we're both in the hole!" "Ahhh, " his friend replied, "But I've been in this same hole before, and I know the way out."
Sometimes talking to someone who's been in the same situation helps..IF you take their advice LOL, and if you stop digging the hole deeper....

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