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[aid] => mick
[title] => one sunny love
[time] => 2004-02-12 23:31:35
[hometext] => this poem is the spontaneous poetic forum teary challenge, hope you all like lol
[bodytext] => the sun above was shining,
beneath her feet the sand,
she walked along the water,
with a flower in her hand,
he listened to her every word,
as they walked down the lane,
she talked to him of yesterdays,
when they were young and rand,
~*~
of her love she was so proud,
he told a joke, she laughed aloud,
they belonged to one another,
ever since they'd made their vows,
she walked by in his shadow,
when appeared some puffy clouds,
she gave him a cheeky curtsy,
and he graced her with a bow,
~*~
turning a path under some trees,
thats where she got on her knees,
the grave she now could see,
and as she brushed away the leaves,
flower now laid down to rest,
she whispered i love you darling,
she'd love him everlastingly,
if only his face once more she'd see...
~*~
sun above did shine again,
she wanted things to be the same
she walked into the water,
with no flower in her hand,
he listened to her every breath,
he watched her as she took each step,
she talked to him of yesterdays,
as she drowned into the depths,
~*~
the sun above was shining,
beneath their feet the sand,
they walked along the water,
with moonbeams in their hands,
he listened to her every word,
as they walked down the lanes,
they talked of love in yesterdays,
when they were live and rand.
~:*:~
:
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[comments] => 12
[counter] => 299
[topic] => 2
[informant] => ladyfawn
[notes] =>
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 80
[ratings] => 16
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LovePoetry
)
one sunny love
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the sun above was shining,
beneath her feet the sand,
she walked along the water,
with a flower in her hand,
he listened to her every word,
as they walked down the lane,
she talked to him of yesterdays,
when they were young and rand,
~*~
of her love she was so proud,
he told a joke, she laughed aloud,
they belonged to one another,
ever since they'd made their vows,
she walked by in his shadow,
when appeared some puffy clouds,
she gave him a cheeky curtsy,
and he graced her with a bow,
~*~
turning a path under some trees,
thats where she got on her knees,
the grave she now could see,
and as she brushed away the leaves,
flower now laid down to rest,
she whispered i love you darling,
she'd love him everlastingly,
if only his face once more she'd see...
~*~
sun above did shine again,
she wanted things to be the same
she walked into the water,
with no flower in her hand,
he listened to her every breath,
he watched her as she took each step,
she talked to him of yesterdays,
as she drowned into the depths,
~*~
the sun above was shining,
beneath their feet the sand,
they walked along the water,
with moonbeams in their hands,
he listened to her every word,
as they walked down the lanes,
they talked of love in yesterdays,
when they were live and rand.
~:*:~
:
.
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Re: one sunny love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:36:53 PM AEST
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oh wow nessa...this is a brilliant sad write.
(wipes eyes).... You talent is amazing. I was gonna post a sad one...but, lol...there wont be any tears left to cry after they read this so whats the point.
Roses
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Re: one sunny love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:55:59 PM AEST
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| Ok where are those tissues? This was so beautiful yet sad and touching! Your talent shines here! Christina |
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Re: one sunny love
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by Kie on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:14:26 AM AEST
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Nessa this is your masterpiece. I am serious, I just can't believe you pulled it off, right off the top of your head! Don't worry about me, i'm just slowly pulling off my toenails with an ice pick out of ENVY! I loved this one so very very much! Awesome Nessa.....
Kie |
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Re: one sunny love
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by venkat on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:55:41 AM AEST
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What a sad write..it has moistured my eyes..well done my friend..:huggers :o)
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Re: one sunny love
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by Angelic_Demon on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:03:42 AM AEST
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Wow... that was good mom. Good thing I got a couple tissues with me right now, hardly ever tear up when reading. (That's saying something *slight laugh*).
Love,
Mars |
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Re: one sunny love
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by emystar on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 07:44:15 PM AEST
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Hey now,
this one can't b beat.
With moonbeams in their hands....
that stanza alone should win the challange.
This write takes all the stain of death and turns it to endless, awesome beauty.
A masterpeice!
Ten thumbs up.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: one sunny love
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by Necromant on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:19:06 PM AEST
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*Sniff sniff* Today I read some really heart tearing poems! This one was amazing!! I loved it so much I read it 3 times and am gonna save the link! ITs so romantic, sad and wonderful in the same time! Wow I love your poems! Gret write keep it up!!
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Re: one sunny love
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 09:25:53 PM AEST
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| Nessa, just stunning ... I was truly moved to tears with this one ... your talent is amazing ... Jan |
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Re: one sunny love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:44:42 AM AEST
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Kie said it perfectly, Christina, it's awesome.
Rita |
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Re: one sunny love
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by New_York_Chick on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:41:10 PM AEST
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amazing poem
very beautifull a definite 5 for that one |
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Re: one sunny love
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:51:17 PM AEST
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| Oh wow, Nessa, this is beautiful. You have outdone yourself again. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: one sunny love
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 10:23:23 AM AEST
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Reading of your enduring love for this man truly warms my heart. Beautiful. Just beautiful.
I hope he always touches you so. Excellent write.
~Scorp |
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