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Array ( [sid] => 34803 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Closing Friendship [time] => 2004-02-13 00:06:01 [hometext] => This is a poem to a dear and very screwed up friend of mine, that obviously is no longer a friend anymore. It seems that I have bad luck in the friendship area. [bodytext] => Closing Frienship
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Why are you my best friend?
I really don't know!
To everyone else I'm just "another kid"
Like out friendship has to be on the low.

When you want me around
I'm always right there!
But when I want to be around
It's like you don't even care.

I don't get you sometimes,
Well more time than less
I used to think you were something great
I thought you were the best.

Then I got to know you better,
Now I come to see,
You only think about yourself
You don't care about me!

Now as this poem closes
So does our friendship
You've stressed me to the max
I can't take anymore of it!

Now everytime you look at this
I hope you think of what kind of friend you had
And when you start to miss me
That will just be too bad! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Aaralyn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Closing Friendship

Contributed by Aaralyn on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:06:01 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Closing Frienship
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Why are you my best friend?
I really don't know!
To everyone else I'm just "another kid"
Like out friendship has to be on the low.

When you want me around
I'm always right there!
But when I want to be around
It's like you don't even care.

I don't get you sometimes,
Well more time than less
I used to think you were something great
I thought you were the best.

Then I got to know you better,
Now I come to see,
You only think about yourself
You don't care about me!

Now as this poem closes
So does our friendship
You've stressed me to the max
I can't take anymore of it!

Now everytime you look at this
I hope you think of what kind of friend you had
And when you start to miss me
That will just be too bad!




Copyright © Aaralyn ... [ 2004-02-13 00:06:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Closing Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:07:00 AM AEST
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this is a sad but very true write.. I have went through the same thing.. I truly understand what this feels like.. I really enjoyed reading this poem it was very good great job I hope you guys get through this misunderstanding..

Peace

JENNA


Re: Closing Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:33:59 PM AEST
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hm, sorry to hear you and you're friend may be comin' to an end...hope yall can resolve what ever the problem(s) is/are...good write


Re: Closing Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:49:29 PM AEST
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I have a friendship like this now. always struggling to get her to keep intouch with me. when she does see me she says she loves me. but she dont act it . great write again. love your work. sandy




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