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Array ( [sid] => 34922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => *:§feetwings§:* [time] => 2004-02-14 00:47:19 [hometext] => there is no disguise which can hide love for long where it exists, or simulate it where it does not. ~la rochefoucauld [bodytext] =>

if i could fly into the sky

where not everythings made to be broken

i would tell everyone to lighten up,

~*~

i would not sit here talking to myself

so i walk on

without you baby,

~*~

dreams that fall
beneath my

feet.

§:**:§

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*:§feetwings§:*

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:47:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

if i could fly into the sky

where not everythings made to be broken

i would tell everyone to lighten up,

~*~

i would not sit here talking to myself

so i walk on

without you baby,

~*~

dreams that fall
beneath my

feet.

§:**:§

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2004-02-14 00:47:19]
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Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:20:25 AM AEST
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AAWW Just loved this write,Well done! Christina

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:21:45 AM AEST
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Simple and sweet. :)

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:35:07 AM AEST
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loved this....very creative....great job

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:54:39 AM AEST
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Wow!
U got it going on my friend.
This is an artistic masterpeice.
luv, huggs, feetwings,
emy
Awesome!

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:32:25 AM AEST
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Awww..its O.k Ness..love and hugs..venkat

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 05:59:25 AM AEST
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well written, a masterpiece
Shari

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 02:51:05 PM AEST
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A little sassy and very wise...Yeah I loved it!

Kie

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:30:04 AM AEST
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Hi ladyfawn,
this is samply very sweet and creative,
love it.

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:52:47 AM AEST
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Sometime few words have an abundance of meaning...this is a perfect example....beautifully sad ((nessa))
Roses
Larry

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:13:49 AM AEST
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short and lovely. very well written. love it.
Arden

Re: *:§feetwings§:* (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:01:11 PM AEST
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Very nice, and unique. cant wait to read the others.

~Soulless~

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