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Array ( [sid] => 35101 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Me Know [time] => 2004-02-15 15:58:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't know what to do!
I can't take it anymore!
Back and forth, over again
With the person I most adore.

You have me so confused
My mind is one big cloud.
I feel like I'm screaming at the top of my lungs
In a heartless crowd.

No one out there seems to care
About my feelings or me
I need someone who will always be there
Not just covenient company.

I am always there for you
As well as everyone else.
But when I have a problem
The only one I can turn to is myself.

It gets kind of lonely
Out on this limb on my own
When I get scared I have nowhere to go
It doesn't even help for me to go home.

I thought you were going to be different
I thought you would be true
But it turns out that you do not care
For anyone but you.

I don't want to lose you
But I can't make it work alone
A friendship is two sided
Not me trying on my own.

There is a time for you to help
You can't just sit back and observe
I need someone who will try
That at least is something I deserve.

So when you make up your mind
About which path you want to take
Find me then and let me know
But until then give me a break.

Decisions need to be made
Before someone ends up getting hurt
I don't need that once again
I'm sick of getting burnt.

So if you don't want to work this out
And be a real true friend
Let me know before I get too attached
Just for this to hit a dead end.
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Let Me Know

Contributed by Aaralyn on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 03:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I don't know what to do!
I can't take it anymore!
Back and forth, over again
With the person I most adore.

You have me so confused
My mind is one big cloud.
I feel like I'm screaming at the top of my lungs
In a heartless crowd.

No one out there seems to care
About my feelings or me
I need someone who will always be there
Not just covenient company.

I am always there for you
As well as everyone else.
But when I have a problem
The only one I can turn to is myself.

It gets kind of lonely
Out on this limb on my own
When I get scared I have nowhere to go
It doesn't even help for me to go home.

I thought you were going to be different
I thought you would be true
But it turns out that you do not care
For anyone but you.

I don't want to lose you
But I can't make it work alone
A friendship is two sided
Not me trying on my own.

There is a time for you to help
You can't just sit back and observe
I need someone who will try
That at least is something I deserve.

So when you make up your mind
About which path you want to take
Find me then and let me know
But until then give me a break.

Decisions need to be made
Before someone ends up getting hurt
I don't need that once again
I'm sick of getting burnt.

So if you don't want to work this out
And be a real true friend
Let me know before I get too attached
Just for this to hit a dead end.




Copyright © Aaralyn ... [ 2004-02-15 15:58:56]
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Re: Let Me Know (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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Thankyou, that is basically what I feel about someone at the moment, I love your poem!<br />


Re: Let Me Know (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:08:33 AM AEST
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You are right on this Hang in there!
Great write! Christina


Re: Let Me Know (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:38:33 PM AEST
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again good write and understandable. sandy


Re: Let Me Know (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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*is pretty sure I know who this is about* I'm so sorry hunny.....and you know who this is. I'll always be here for you, ok?


Re: Let Me Know (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:40:33 PM AEST
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*is pretty sure I know who this is about* I'm so sorry hunny.....and you know who this is. I'll always be here for you, ok?
-Brittany




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