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Array ( [sid] => 35238 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yesterday's Pain [time] => 2004-02-16 20:10:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => she stands at the window
cheek pressed to the pane
while the last trace of summer
becomes drenched in the rain

her eyes are set in a ghastly stare
while the day wears on but
she doesn't care

there is work to be done
which she hasn't begun
so she takes a deep breath
then begins to hum

slowly the evening arrives
and trying hard not
to cry she sighs
wishing that she weren't alive
she knows tomrrow
will be the same for all
she can feel is yesterday's pain [comments] => 7 [counter] => 323 [topic] => 39 [informant] => faithmairee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Yesterday's Pain

Contributed by faithmairee on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

she stands at the window
cheek pressed to the pane
while the last trace of summer
becomes drenched in the rain

her eyes are set in a ghastly stare
while the day wears on but
she doesn't care

there is work to be done
which she hasn't begun
so she takes a deep breath
then begins to hum

slowly the evening arrives
and trying hard not
to cry she sighs
wishing that she weren't alive
she knows tomrrow
will be the same for all
she can feel is yesterday's pain

Copyright © faithmairee ... [ 2004-02-16 20:10:35]
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Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:34:06 PM AEST
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Wow, that is gripping. very nicly done.

Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:40:37 PM AEST
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Really touching write..... full of emotion...
Jenni

Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:51:02 PM AEST
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this was beautiful... I can relate quite a bit.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:51:06 PM AEST
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this was very emotional and sad..i really like it
luv always

Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:53:44 PM AEST
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stunningly simple, yet so easy to understand. i relate to this, and i applaude your choice of words.

Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:43:27 PM AEST
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So sad and remarkably written. Kie

Re: Yesterday's Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:24:46 AM AEST
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Remarkable. I truly can relate.

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