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Array ( [sid] => 35287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll never see what I see in you in me [time] => 2004-02-17 05:21:08 [hometext] => a little help from my messenger friends, not aimed at anyone inparticular. [bodytext] => I think that I shall never see
What I see in you in me
You're boring and you're lame
You're such an annoying dame
I think you're missing a piece of you're puzzle
And most of the time you should where a muzzle
Keep your mouth shut and let us think you are smart
Or give me some earplugs before you start
You cause me great anguish
You are so incredibly languish
All I ask is that you decease and withdraw
Your exsistance has to be breaking some kind of law
I beg of you go and leave me alone
And stop being such a drone
Was it something I said made you think there's a chance
That somehow someway maybe our friendship would enhance?
I'll be sure to close that "maybe someday" door right away
I give you permission, my loyalty to betray
Just leave me alone let me live in peace
Stop what you're doing, I ask that you cease
I know that I will never see
What I see in you in me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 25 [informant] => RochelleLloyd [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
I'll never see what I see in you in me

Contributed by RochelleLloyd on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 05:21:08 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



I think that I shall never see
What I see in you in me
You're boring and you're lame
You're such an annoying dame
I think you're missing a piece of you're puzzle
And most of the time you should where a muzzle
Keep your mouth shut and let us think you are smart
Or give me some earplugs before you start
You cause me great anguish
You are so incredibly languish
All I ask is that you decease and withdraw
Your exsistance has to be breaking some kind of law
I beg of you go and leave me alone
And stop being such a drone
Was it something I said made you think there's a chance
That somehow someway maybe our friendship would enhance?
I'll be sure to close that "maybe someday" door right away
I give you permission, my loyalty to betray
Just leave me alone let me live in peace
Stop what you're doing, I ask that you cease
I know that I will never see
What I see in you in me




Copyright © RochelleLloyd ... [ 2004-02-17 05:21:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I'll never see what I see in you in me (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:36:54 AM AEST
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I liked it, just the one line...I'll be sure to close that "maybe someday" door right away...seems a little long.
I didn't notice either, and I should have. Was it posted under angry poetry? If so, really good job. A+


Re: I'll never see what I see in you in me (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:23:12 AM AEST
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Would you put a muzzle on her
if ahe was reading poetry to you.
Hmmm, maybe not.
Keep them coming hear.
Oh see a few of mine.


Re: I'll never see what I see in you in me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:18:29 AM AEST
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Lots of anger in this poem and writing is a great way to vent. Enjoyed reading this immensely! Kie




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